Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Elixir of life









A stain free heart is
Elixir of happiness
Don’t let envy pass

A ray of hope
Is the elixir of life
Ban pessimism


Trust and hard work is
The elixir of success
Don’t ever give up



          Short Story Slam





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16 Comments:

Celestial Dreamz said...

well written ... words of wisdom ... liked it... :)

Susie Clevenger said...

such positive elixirs we should all drink... :)

Deborah said...

Wonderful!

Ramesh Sood said...

Lovely sprinkles of wisdom these.. liked and feel enhanced.. thank you Tarang...

Morning said...

love it, wise words or tips.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Loved all three but the best are haiku one and three.


Melanie

mjshorts said...

Couldn't agree more - pessimism can be so damaging.

imnotaverse said...

I like the simple wisdom of these.

Lena said...

I will do my best to learn this by heart!!

saurabh modi said...

Nice!
my poem!!
http://dreamsflow.wordpress.com/poetry/dream-that-had-to-end/

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I'll take several rays of hope, please! :-)

A Little Elixir

TraciB said...

Excellent counsel in these verses, Tarang. I like the repetition of the prompt in each one.

Teresa Marie said...

Very nicely done! :)

bendedspoon said...

Perfect! I'm taking it! :)

Jeanie McBain said...

Nice words of wisdom :)

e.a.s. demers said...

Very inspiring post! Nicely done :-)

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