My Translation

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Elixir of life









A stain free heart is
Elixir of happiness
Don’t let envy pass

A ray of hope
Is the elixir of life
Ban pessimism


Trust and hard work is
The elixir of success
Don’t ever give up



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16 comments:

  1. Celestial DreamzSeptember 14, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    well written ... words of wisdom ... liked it... :)

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  2. Susie ClevengerSeptember 14, 2011 at 9:16 AM

    such positive elixirs we should all drink... :)

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  3. DeborahSeptember 14, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    Wonderful!

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  4. Ramesh SoodSeptember 14, 2011 at 4:02 PM

    Lovely sprinkles of wisdom these.. liked and feel enhanced.. thank you Tarang...

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  5. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarrySeptember 14, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    love it, wise words or tips.

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  6. Cassiopeia RisesSeptember 14, 2011 at 9:00 PM

    Loved all three but the best are haiku one and three.


    Melanie

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 9:13 PM

    Couldn't agree more - pessimism can be so damaging.

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 11:53 PM

    I like the simple wisdom of these.

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  9. HelenaSeptember 15, 2011 at 1:33 AM

    I will do my best to learn this by heart!!

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  10. saurabh modiSeptember 15, 2011 at 1:49 AM

    Nice!
    my poem!!
    http://dreamsflow.wordpress.com/poetry/dream-that-had-to-end/

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 15, 2011 at 6:09 AM

    I'll take several rays of hope, please! :-)

    A Little Elixir

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  12. TraciBSeptember 15, 2011 at 10:31 PM

    Excellent counsel in these verses, Tarang. I like the repetition of the prompt in each one.

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  13. Teresa MarieSeptember 17, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    Very nicely done! :)

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  14. bendedspoonSeptember 18, 2011 at 4:37 AM

    Perfect! I'm taking it! :)

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  15. UnknownSeptember 19, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    Nice words of wisdom :)

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  16. e.a.s. demersSeptember 27, 2011 at 1:21 AM

    Very inspiring post! Nicely done :-)

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