Sunday, June 3, 2012

Optimism



Lock the negative
thoughts, let the soothing breeze of
Optimism flow

Fickle principles
Blur the clarity of thoughts
Prefer steadiness

Not only in our
Dreams, but success should bloom in
the garden of life



Written for: Haiku Heights
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45 Comments:

Me said...

Lovely poem as always...full of optimism :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Me!:)

Anu Gupta said...

nicely set haiku in form of poem ...

Leo said...

I like that first one best.. it's inspiring, simple and well writ.. It stands on its own too, which doubles that beauty. Thanks for sharing.

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

Wonderful set of haiku ~ lovely messages ~ thanks, ^_^

MAHARUKH said...

not really an optimist or pessimist but a human I am :) delightful haiku :)

Harshad mehta said...

Yes, success should bloom in the garden of life. Excellent set of Haiku.

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Anu: Thank you!:)

@ Leo: Thanks a lot for your nice words! Glad you liked it:)

@ Carol: Thank you very much!:)

@ Maharukh: :) Thanks!:)

@ Harshadji: Thank you so much!:)

Vållῐ ★☆ said...

You mix all the prompts and write as a single haiku post...Good creativity....Good one on optimism Tarang! :)

Grace said...

May it always bloom in the garden ~

Happy day to you ~

Kim Nelson said...

Our themes and messages run on parallel tracks today!
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/06/02/do-what-you-love/

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Valli: Thank you so much Valli!:)

@ Grace: Thank you!:)

@ Kim: :)

Jaideep said...

As always Tarang, wise words with poetic beauty,.garden of life :)

rebecca said...

so much beauty in your haiku!
perfect uplifting messages taking us inward to paradise. thank you tarang for being here sharing yours.

Neha said...

Beautiful Haiku Tarang :)

Sandra said...

in the garden of life...so true!!

beccagivens said...

Nice, Tarang!
Flaming Locks

Kathe W. said...

Yes! life is a garden- nice uplifting poem.

Loredana Donovan said...

All very positive and lovely haiku :)

KB said...

Lovely poem. My COT is up too.

Jim said...

Hi Tarang ~~ Fickle principles versus steadiness. Which will win?
..

awalkinmyheart said...

A positive take on the prompt. Love the message.

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Jaideep: Thank you very much!:)

@ Rebecca: Thank you so much!:)

@ Neha: Thanks!:)

@ Sandra: :)

@ Becca: Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Kathe: Thank you!:)

@ Loredana: Thanks a lot!:)

@ KB: Thanks!:)

@ Jim: Principles & Steadiness:)

@ awalkinmyheart: Thank you so much!:)

Sue said...

Life IS a garden, isn't it?

=)

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes it is, a kind of:)

Amber said...

Each one is a pearl of wisdom! Well written. :)

redondowriter said...

Wonderful set of haikus. I'm reading this on an overcast Monday when I'd like to hole up with a book, but you've reminded me to be optimistic.

The Write Girl said...

I love your poem on optimism. So very inspiring.

Karen S. said...

Fickle principle! Love this! Great read!

Sanjana Pareek said...

enjoyed reading all three..positive messages there:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Amber: Thanks a lot!:)

@ Redondowriter: :)Thanks!

@ The Write Girl: Thank you!:)

@ Karen: Thank you so much!:)

@ Sanjana: Thank you!:)

Lenore said...

Gorgeous! So glad I stopped by to read this..very uplifting :-)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks for stopping by! Glad you liked it. Thank you so much Lenore!:)

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Beautiful positive words.

Anna :o]

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Anna!:)

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Tarang,

A lovely Haiku of positivity.

Eileen

covered-in-moss said...

success does bloom in the garden of life ;) -robin
http://mysecretinnuendo.com/2012/05/29/covered-in-moss/

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I need to take your advice and lock the negative thoughts! Thank you!

The Lock Begins to Sing

Pranita said...

I relate a lot to ur haiku always... the frequency matches a lot with my thoughts... a lot of positivity in ur work! :) Loved the last haiku vmuch..

Flavors of experience!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Eileen: Thank you very much!:)

@ Robin: :)

@ MMT: Glad you think so. Thank you so much!:)

@ Pranita: :-) Thank you!:)

$unshine of the Moon said...

Simple and Inspiring :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you sunshine...:)

elainedanforth said...

Your positive message comes across very nicely in the triple haiku form you have chosen.

Happy Rally! You can find my entry at:
http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2012/09/08/fall-into-anticipation/

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you very much Elaine!:)

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