Lock the negative
thoughts, let the soothing breeze of
Optimism flow
Fickle principles
Blur the clarity of thoughts
Prefer steadiness
Not only in our
Dreams, but success should bloom in
the garden of life
Written for: Haiku Heights
Lovely poem as always...full of optimism :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Me!:)
ReplyDeletenicely set haiku in form of poem ...
ReplyDeleteI like that first one best.. it's inspiring, simple and well writ.. It stands on its own too, which doubles that beauty. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWonderful set of haiku ~ lovely messages ~ thanks, ^_^
ReplyDeletenot really an optimist or pessimist but a human I am :) delightful haiku :)
ReplyDeleteYes, success should bloom in the garden of life. Excellent set of Haiku.
ReplyDelete@ Anu: Thank you!:)
ReplyDelete@ Leo: Thanks a lot for your nice words! Glad you liked it:)
@ Carol: Thank you very much!:)
@ Maharukh: :) Thanks!:)
@ Harshadji: Thank you so much!:)
You mix all the prompts and write as a single haiku post...Good creativity....Good one on optimism Tarang! :)
ReplyDeleteMay it always bloom in the garden ~
ReplyDeleteHappy day to you ~
Our themes and messages run on parallel tracks today!
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@ Valli: Thank you so much Valli!:)
ReplyDelete@ Grace: Thank you!:)
@ Kim: :)
As always Tarang, wise words with poetic beauty,.garden of life :)
ReplyDeleteso much beauty in your haiku!
ReplyDeleteperfect uplifting messages taking us inward to paradise. thank you tarang for being here sharing yours.
Beautiful Haiku Tarang :)
ReplyDeletein the garden of life...so true!!
ReplyDeleteNice, Tarang!
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Yes! life is a garden- nice uplifting poem.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. My COT is up too.
ReplyDeleteHi Tarang ~~ Fickle principles versus steadiness. Which will win?
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A positive take on the prompt. Love the message.
ReplyDelete@ Jaideep: Thank you very much!:)
ReplyDelete@ Rebecca: Thank you so much!:)
@ Neha: Thanks!:)
@ Sandra: :)
@ Becca: Thanks!:)
@ Kathe: Thank you!:)
ReplyDelete@ Loredana: Thanks a lot!:)
@ KB: Thanks!:)
@ Jim: Principles & Steadiness:)
@ awalkinmyheart: Thank you so much!:)
Life IS a garden, isn't it?
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Yes it is, a kind of:)
ReplyDeleteEach one is a pearl of wisdom! Well written. :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful set of haikus. I'm reading this on an overcast Monday when I'd like to hole up with a book, but you've reminded me to be optimistic.
ReplyDeleteI love your poem on optimism. So very inspiring.
ReplyDeleteFickle principle! Love this! Great read!
ReplyDeleteenjoyed reading all three..positive messages there:)
ReplyDelete@ Amber: Thanks a lot!:)
ReplyDelete@ Redondowriter: :)Thanks!
@ The Write Girl: Thank you!:)
@ Karen: Thank you so much!:)
@ Sanjana: Thank you!:)
Gorgeous! So glad I stopped by to read this..very uplifting :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by! Glad you liked it. Thank you so much Lenore!:)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful positive words.
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Thank you Anna!:)
ReplyDeleteTarang,
ReplyDeleteA lovely Haiku of positivity.
Eileen
success does bloom in the garden of life ;) -robin
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I need to take your advice and lock the negative thoughts! Thank you!
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I relate a lot to ur haiku always... the frequency matches a lot with my thoughts... a lot of positivity in ur work! :) Loved the last haiku vmuch..
ReplyDeleteFlavors of experience!
@ Eileen: Thank you very much!:)
ReplyDelete@ Robin: :)
@ MMT: Glad you think so. Thank you so much!:)
@ Pranita: :-) Thank you!:)
Simple and Inspiring :)
ReplyDeleteThank you sunshine...:)
ReplyDeleteYour positive message comes across very nicely in the triple haiku form you have chosen.
ReplyDeleteHappy Rally! You can find my entry at:
http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2012/09/08/fall-into-anticipation/
Thank you very much Elaine!:)
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