My Translation

Thursday, September 29, 2011

Rhythm







Moon, floating in rhythm
Slipped out of the veil of clouds
Moonlight bliss sprinkled

Rhythm of melody
Ushers the angst out of mind
Enlivens the soul



For: Haiku Heights
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9 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodSeptember 29, 2011 at 5:45 PM

    Anything Moony fascinates me.. I am happy to be here Tarang.. Thanks.. Well done again..

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2011 at 6:09 PM

    beautiful :)

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  3. andy sewinaSeptember 29, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    I do like that line - enlivens the soul!

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  4. Susie ClevengerSeptember 29, 2011 at 10:51 PM

    I so love the moon...I like the visual of your haiku...it reminds me of the times the moon slipped through the clouds....music is my salvation at times...I love both of your haikus!

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  5. SarasSeptember 30, 2011 at 12:16 AM

    I like the rhythmic unfolding of beauty in the Haikus.

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 30, 2011 at 6:32 AM

    Ushering out angst sounds good to me!



    Rhythms here and here

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  7. EllaMarch 8, 2012 at 9:24 PM

    I love this haiku! So visually stunning~ The last line captures the essence! Well Done

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  8. Laurie KolpMarch 9, 2012 at 12:44 AM

    Much agreed!

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  9. Tarang SinhaMarch 9, 2012 at 1:43 PM

    I truly thank you all for your nice comments!:)

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