My Translation

Wednesday, June 15, 2011

We will meet again…





Painting by Leonid Afremov 
I cherish the memories…
when we walked together in life.
I remember the chats…
which we rambled.
I miss the laughter...
which we shared.
I hum the tune…
which we sang together.
I regret the conflicts…
which occurred without any reason.
I hate your forgiveness…
which you implied when I was wrong.
I love you more than before…
when you’re not around me.
And, I hope we will meet again…




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37 comments:

  1. InaJune 15, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    Lovely, all the feelings that ome with love!

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  2. AlcinaJune 15, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    I can relate to this post so well..sometime i had also written something like this..Superb work :)

    P.S.-The image that you have put..have been in love with it for a very longtime..

    Alcina

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  3. PaulJune 15, 2011 at 11:55 PM

    Lovely image, and poignant writing - thank you!

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  4. MaggieJune 16, 2011 at 12:20 AM

    "I hate your forgiveness..." What a profound statement.

    This is sad and lovely.

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  5. AnonymousJune 16, 2011 at 5:10 AM

    We sometimes dont miss what we have until its no longer there.

    A very reflective piece

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  6. AmityJune 16, 2011 at 7:21 AM

    Ohm this is superb...a reminder of how happy we were once in the company of our beloved!

    HOpe you will meet again Tarang! Yes...because if he's meant for you, he will come back!

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  7. JingleJune 16, 2011 at 7:22 AM

    meet again indeed,
    superb and very lovely imagery.

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  8. Henry ClemmonsJune 16, 2011 at 9:42 AM

    I love that paint and ur words were an excellent accompanyment (sp?) lol. Great write. Love a love poem.

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  9. Celestial DreamzJune 16, 2011 at 9:52 AM

    very beautiful ... a hope in the end makes it just complete.

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  10. Tarang SinhaJune 16, 2011 at 12:54 PM

    I truly thank you all for such nice comments. I'm glad you all liked it!

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  11. Tarang SinhaJune 16, 2011 at 12:57 PM

    @ Amity: This poem is just a creation of my imagination. It has nothing to do with me. Thanks.

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  12. UnknownJune 16, 2011 at 10:58 PM

    Really makes one reflect. Been doing a lot of that lately. And I actually have been doing this little project in one of my journals. Trying to think back as far as I can remember and think of how things were, for me, the city I live in, families, anything really. And then keep moving forward, until I get to where I am now.

    Anyhow thought I would share this, seeing this piece is such the remembrance piece. I love how you ended the piece and how you move in different tenses as you list your memories, sentiments.

    SO well done, I really appreciate this, thanks:)

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  13. AnonymousJune 17, 2011 at 1:04 AM

    I enjoyed the togetherness.
    You have a great imagination.
    I hope you and yours meet again.
    Genebrother

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  14. AnonymousJune 17, 2011 at 1:31 AM

    Ahhh heartache.. simple and expressive and complex all at once. xx

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  15. HelenaJune 17, 2011 at 3:06 AM

    Conflicting sides to feeling real love. Nice piece indeed.

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  16. AnonymousJune 17, 2011 at 4:17 AM

    If this is your imagination, it's lovely imagery.

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  17. AnonymousJune 17, 2011 at 10:08 AM

    Tarang... Awesome write.. I love to write to pictures and make up a story that goes along.


    Cheers to you~~~~Jen

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  18. AnonymousJune 17, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    "I hate your forgiveness…
    which you implied when I was wrong." such a poignant line this really got to me. Brilliant poem

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  19. Tarang SinhaJune 17, 2011 at 2:04 PM

    @Fred: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

    @Genebrother: Thank a lot!

    @Catieeliza: Thank you so much!

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  20. Tarang SinhaJune 17, 2011 at 2:07 PM

    @Lena: Thank you so much!

    @Daydreamer...: Of course this is my imagination. Thanks!

    @Jennirey: Thank you so much. Pictures are great prompt to unlock your imagination.

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  21. Tarang SinhaJune 17, 2011 at 2:08 PM

    Thank you so much Mindlovemisery! I'm glad you liked it.

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  22. bendedspoonJune 18, 2011 at 6:57 PM

    hopeful and wonderful memories...like it :)

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  23. Harshad MehtaJune 18, 2011 at 9:54 PM

    Realization of love is profound when one is not around.

    So well put in words.

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  24. Jack Edwards PoetryJune 19, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    Brilliant poem, with a great use of repetition.

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  25. AnonymousJune 20, 2011 at 6:04 AM

    We tend to miss things only after they are gone. Great poem it really shows emotion.

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  26. Vinay Leo R.June 25, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    Well said, the repetition is wonderful! And I can relate to this feeling of longing for someone too..!

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  27. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2011 at 9:34 PM

    why do you hate the forgiveness

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  28. Tarang SinhaSeptember 23, 2011 at 12:15 PM

    @ Zongrik: You should read the next line carefully. Thanks:)

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  29. Sherry Blue SkyJune 5, 2013 at 10:06 PM

    I can relate so much to these feelings.......we so often wish for the chance to meet again. Just one more time.

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  30. Lisa A. WilliamsJune 6, 2013 at 4:40 AM

    To have another chance, I wonder what we would say? A lovely poem!

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  31. Kodjo DeynooJune 6, 2013 at 4:12 PM

    We always miss them most when they are gone

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  32. TCPCJune 6, 2013 at 5:12 PM

    Tidbits of love keeps it alive1

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  33. SuzyJune 8, 2013 at 8:22 AM

    I sense a sadness and some yearning. But nicely written.
    Dropping by from Verse First
    Suzy - http://ilasoulpoems.blogspot.co.nz/2013/06/i-remember.html

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