Wednesday, June 15, 2011

We will meet again…






I cherish the memories…
when we walked together in life.
I remember the chats…
which we rambled.
I miss the laughter...
which we shared.
I hum the tune…
which we sang together.
I regret the conflicts…
which occurred without any reason.
I hate your forgiveness…
which you implied when I was wrong.
I love you more than before…
when you’re not around me.
Still, I hope we will meet again…




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38 Comments:

Ina said...

Lovely, all the feelings that ome with love!

Alcina said...

I can relate to this post so well..sometime i had also written something like this..Superb work :)

P.S.-The image that you have put..have been in love with it for a very longtime..

Alcina

Paul said...

Lovely image, and poignant writing - thank you!

thingy said...

"I hate your forgiveness..." What a profound statement.

This is sad and lovely.

Tino said...

We sometimes dont miss what we have until its no longer there.

A very reflective piece

Amity said...

Ohm this is superb...a reminder of how happy we were once in the company of our beloved!

HOpe you will meet again Tarang! Yes...because if he's meant for you, he will come back!

Jingle said...

meet again indeed,
superb and very lovely imagery.

Henry Clemmons said...

I love that paint and ur words were an excellent accompanyment (sp?) lol. Great write. Love a love poem.

Celestial Dreamz said...

very beautiful ... a hope in the end makes it just complete.

Tarang Sinha said...

I truly thank you all for such nice comments. I'm glad you all liked it!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Amity: This poem is just a creation of my imagination. It has nothing to do with me. Thanks.

Fred said...

Really makes one reflect. Been doing a lot of that lately. And I actually have been doing this little project in one of my journals. Trying to think back as far as I can remember and think of how things were, for me, the city I live in, families, anything really. And then keep moving forward, until I get to where I am now.

Anyhow thought I would share this, seeing this piece is such the remembrance piece. I love how you ended the piece and how you move in different tenses as you list your memories, sentiments.

SO well done, I really appreciate this, thanks:)

genebrother said...

I enjoyed the togetherness.
You have a great imagination.
I hope you and yours meet again.
Genebrother

catieeliza said...

Ahhh heartache.. simple and expressive and complex all at once. xx

Lena said...

Conflicting sides to feeling real love. Nice piece indeed.

daydreamertoo.com said...

If this is your imagination, it's lovely imagery.

jennirey said...

Tarang... Awesome write.. I love to write to pictures and make up a story that goes along.


Cheers to you~~~~Jen

mindlovemisery said...

"I hate your forgiveness…
which you implied when I was wrong." such a poignant line this really got to me. Brilliant poem

Tarang Sinha said...

@Fred: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

@Genebrother: Thank a lot!

@Catieeliza: Thank you so much!

Tarang Sinha said...

@Lena: Thank you so much!

@Daydreamer...: Of course this is my imagination. Thanks!

@Jennirey: Thank you so much. Pictures are great prompt to unlock your imagination.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Mindlovemisery! I'm glad you liked it.

bendedspoon said...

hopeful and wonderful memories...like it :)

Harshad mehta said...

Realization of love is profound when one is not around.

So well put in words.

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Brilliant poem, with a great use of repetition.

tallyt said...

We tend to miss things only after they are gone. Great poem it really shows emotion.

Leo said...

Well said, the repetition is wonderful! And I can relate to this feeling of longing for someone too..!

zongrik said...

why do you hate the forgiveness

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Zongrik: You should read the next line carefully. Thanks:)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I can relate so much to these feelings.......we so often wish for the chance to meet again. Just one more time.

Tarang Sinha said...

:)

Lisa A. Williams said...

To have another chance, I wonder what we would say? A lovely poem!

Kodjo Deynoo said...

We always miss them most when they are gone

Akila G said...

Tidbits of love keeps it alive1

Suzy said...

I sense a sadness and some yearning. But nicely written.
Dropping by from Verse First
Suzy - http://ilasoulpoems.blogspot.co.nz/2013/06/i-remember.html

Tarang Sinha said...

:) Thank you!

Tarang Sinha said...

True!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

You're right Akila!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Suzy!:)

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