Sunday, November 20, 2011

Final adieu

Emotions blended
With smiles and togetherness
Reside in the urn

Seek permission for
The final adieu with tears
Hurtful truth of life

Memories never…
…Say goodbye, treasured throughout
The journey of life

For: Haiku Heights
        One Single Impression
         Poets United



Ramesh Sood said...

This is very poigant and rouching Tarang.. recently saw a Urn carrying ashes of a dear one..your poem brought it all back..

Old Raven said...

Very good.

beccagivens said...

Well knitted to involve multiple prompts!

Morning said...

amazing one, well done.


magicinthebackyard said...

there is a softness is your words, lulling and heartbreaking. I love that. I am following!!! :)

Laura Maria said...

The first two lines were just great!!

M. A. S. said...

I think the 1st stanza is a wonderful poem on its own.

Harshad mehta said...

Words that Touched.

The Write Girl said...

Three perfectly woven haikus. Nicely written.

DeLi said...

so true, memories always and is forever a part that lives with us

Chèvrefeuille said...

A nice suite of haiku. I love the third verse the most. Espescially the last line "the journey of life" wonderfull crafted.

Tarang Sinha said...

@ RS: Thanks that you liked my poem, but what you recalled is really painful:(

@ Old Raven: Thanks.

@ Becca: Thanks!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Morning: Thank you. Glad you liked it.

@ magicinthebackyard: Thank you so much! Welcome to my blog:)

@ Laura: Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ M.A.S: Thank you:)

@ Harshadji: Thanks! Glad you liked it:)

@ The Write Girl: Thank you so much!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Deli: Yes you're right. Thanks:)

@ Chèvrefeuille: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

Jyoti Mishra said...

beautiful n soulful

Loved it tarang :)

Suzy said...

Loved the last one - beautifully portrayed - those beautiful memories never die.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Indeed, urns contain a lot more than just ashes!

My Take on the Prompt

Grace said...

Very nice... I like that emotions reside in the urn, and saying goodbye to the journey of life ~

the critics said...

wonderful.......especially the first

i loved it

here is mine

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