My Translation

Sunday, November 20, 2011

Final adieu



Emotions blended
With smiles and togetherness
Reside in the urn

Seek permission for
The final adieu with tears
Hurtful truth of life


Memories never…
…Say goodbye, treasured throughout
The journey of life









For: Haiku Heights
        One Single Impression
         Poets United




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20 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodNovember 20, 2011 at 8:40 PM

    This is very poigant and rouching Tarang.. recently saw a Urn carrying ashes of a dear one..your poem brought it all back..

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  2. Old RavenNovember 20, 2011 at 8:55 PM

    Very good.

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  3. AnonymousNovember 20, 2011 at 11:18 PM

    Well knitted to involve multiple prompts!

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  4. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryNovember 21, 2011 at 1:14 AM

    amazing one, well done.

    :)

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  5. AnonymousNovember 21, 2011 at 1:40 AM

    there is a softness is your words, lulling and heartbreaking. I love that. I am following!!! :)

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  6. Laura MariaNovember 21, 2011 at 1:58 AM

    The first two lines were just great!!

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  7. M. A. S.November 21, 2011 at 3:54 AM

    I think the 1st stanza is a wonderful poem on its own.

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  8. Harshad MehtaNovember 21, 2011 at 8:33 AM

    Words that Touched.
    Thanks.

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  9. The Write GirlNovember 21, 2011 at 9:10 AM

    Three perfectly woven haikus. Nicely written.

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  10. DeLiNovember 21, 2011 at 2:24 PM

    so true, memories always and is forever a part that lives with us

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 21, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    A nice suite of haiku. I love the third verse the most. Espescially the last line "the journey of life" wonderfull crafted.

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  12. Tarang SinhaNovember 21, 2011 at 7:26 PM

    @ RS: Thanks that you liked my poem, but what you recalled is really painful:(

    @ Old Raven: Thanks.

    @ Becca: Thanks!

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  13. Tarang SinhaNovember 21, 2011 at 8:05 PM

    @ Morning: Thank you. Glad you liked it.

    @ magicinthebackyard: Thank you so much! Welcome to my blog:)

    @ Laura: Thanks!:)

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  14. Tarang SinhaNovember 21, 2011 at 8:06 PM

    @ M.A.S: Thank you:)

    @ Harshadji: Thanks! Glad you liked it:)

    @ The Write Girl: Thank you so much!:)

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  15. Tarang SinhaNovember 21, 2011 at 8:08 PM

    @ Deli: Yes you're right. Thanks:)

    @ Chèvrefeuille: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

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  16. Jyoti MishraNovember 21, 2011 at 10:01 PM

    beautiful n soulful

    Loved it tarang :)

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  17. SuzyNovember 23, 2011 at 8:27 AM

    Loved the last one - beautifully portrayed - those beautiful memories never die.

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  18. Magical Mystical TeacherNovember 24, 2011 at 5:01 AM

    Indeed, urns contain a lot more than just ashes!

    My Take on the Prompt

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  19. GraceNovember 26, 2011 at 7:22 AM

    Very nice... I like that emotions reside in the urn, and saying goodbye to the journey of life ~

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  20. the criticsNovember 26, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    wonderful.......especially the first

    i loved it

    here is mine
    http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2011/11/urn.html

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