My Translation

Sunday, December 11, 2011

Candle









Candle...


Creates illuminating aura
Aroma permeates the room
Nestled in coziness
Dinner seems romantic
Lustrous smile spreads
Enlivening the twilight




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15 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 11, 2011 at 11:40 PM

    Sweet acrostic. Engaging the senses very nicely! Thanks for sharing!
    Kellie
    @BackyardPonders

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  2. Susie ClevengerDecember 12, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    Beautiful...lovely job on the acrostic

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  3. Laura MariaDecember 12, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    Great piece. You managed to perfectly capture a vivid description of a candle in six lines.

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  4. Jyoti MishraDecember 12, 2011 at 2:04 PM

    that was well captured..
    u managed to sum up all the feelings related with candles.

    Great job !!

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  5. Tarang SinhaDecember 12, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    @ Kellie: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Susie: Thanks!:)

    @ Laura: Thanks!:)

    @ Jyoti: Thank you so much!

    Glad you like it:)

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  6. AnonymousDecember 14, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    nice acrostic

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  7. Lady In ReadDecember 15, 2011 at 12:27 PM

    All the wonderful feelings a candle evokes captured here,,

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  8. Tarang SinhaDecember 15, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    Thank you so much Zongrik and Lady in red:)

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  9. Julie Catherine VignaDecember 16, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    I love acrostics, and love the phrase, "nestled in coziness" - very nice! :)

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  10. Bethe77December 19, 2011 at 1:43 PM

    Beautiful!
    Blessings

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  11. Tarang SinhaDecember 19, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    Thank you Julie & Bethe:)

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  12. Harshad MehtaApril 22, 2013 at 5:01 PM

    Romantic evening! So well rendered.

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  13. Rae TriggApril 23, 2013 at 8:36 AM

    Your words paint a lovely scene. Well done.

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