Image Credit to Whitebook @ DeviantArt, titled A Christmas Story for Rezzan
Beaming face,
Happy heart
Gleeful giggles,
Contented mind
Peaceful life
Why can’t I have these assets?
She thought, worried, in sleepless night.
Life, like barren tree in murky twilight,
Laughed at her like a devil.
Tired of tireless problems
Annoyed at her tribulations
Chagrined by turbulence
She complained with aching heart …
Why me? Why me? Why me?
Eerie tranquility persists
Some questions hang unanswered
Sometimes…
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Yes, but the answer is there. very nice take on the prompt.
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powerful and sad.
ReplyDeletewell done.
So poignant.
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I like this!
ReplyDeleteVery well done and yes though it was sad, I think there was an answer there for her, if she just looked a little deeper.
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love the rhyming and imagery.
ReplyDeletegood one..very profound!
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Oh yes, some questions hang unanswered.
ReplyDeleteVery poignant.
Thank you so much!:)
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