Thursday, February 23, 2012

The joy of giving

The joy of giving
Brings a peaceful smile and a
Sense of contentment

Sense of contentment
Lies in fulfilling someone’s
Cherished wish and dreams

Cherished wish and dreams
Keep hopes alight, offering
A new horizon

Written for: The Haiku Challenge
Shared @ Poets United



Cloaked Monk/Terri said...

I love these three haiku. They go great together and each stands alone. Beautiful.

janaki nagaraj said...


Gemma Wiseman said...

Love the idea of offering a new horizon! Delightful!

Ramesh Sood said...

New horizens wait for all of us.. well said..

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Ah, but the question is: Who will fulfill YOUR dreams and wishes?

Sheep Joy and Blanket Joy

Would you please consider using only comment moderation and forgetting about Blogger's new, and very-difficult-to-read word verification? My eyes will thank you, and, honestly, you really don't need both. It's overkill. Thanks again.

Ellecee said...

I enjoyed this Haiku very much. We all have our cherished dreams. Thank you

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

'Sense of contentment' Very truly said.....You mentioned facts in a poetic way!
Beautiful dear :)

A burning candle

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Terri: Thank you so much!:)

@ Janaki: Thanks!:)

@ Gemma: Thanks a lot!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Rameshji: Thanks!:)

@ MMT: Mostly it’s your hope, positivity, determination, hard work or sometimes destiny, and maybe your dear ones who certainly feel contentment and joy in doing so:) Thank you so much!

@ Ellecee: Thanks!:)

@ Valli: Thank you!:)

Vidya Sury said...

Well written haiku set. And what a cool blog layout, Tarang!

becca givens said...

Tarang, this is lovely. I like your inspirational line in "A new horizon" ... although, might I suggest in keeping with the ABC CDE EFA form SiS requested ... change A new horizon to your first line The joy of giving! Here is my Day 23.
Happy Thursday!

Grace said...

I like the joy of giving...But if you don't mind, since we are following a pattern ~

Tweak the last line to:

Cherished wish and dreams
Keep hopes alight, offering
The joy of giving (same as the first line)

Happy day :-)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Vidya: Thank you so much!:)

@ Becca & Grace: I wanted to repeat the first line in order to maintain the pattern but don't you think it will lose its meaning? I thought so that’s why I preferred “A new horizon”

Thank you so much for your suggestions and such nice comments!:)
Have a nice day:)

Someone is Special said...

very beautiful said.. Loved it..

booguloo said...

Have to agree with Terri.

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