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The joy of giving
Brings a peaceful smile and a
Sense of contentment
Sense of contentment
Lies in fulfilling someone’s
Cherished wish and dreams
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Cherished wish and dreams
Keep hopes alight, offering
A new horizon
Written for: The Haiku Challenge
Shared @ Poets United
I love these three haiku. They go great together and each stands alone. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeleteLove the idea of offering a new horizon! Delightful!
ReplyDeleteNew horizens wait for all of us.. well said..
ReplyDeleteAh, but the question is: Who will fulfill YOUR dreams and wishes?
ReplyDeleteSheep Joy and Blanket Joy
Would you please consider using only comment moderation and forgetting about Blogger's new, and very-difficult-to-read word verification? My eyes will thank you, and, honestly, you really don't need both. It's overkill. Thanks again.
I enjoyed this Haiku very much. We all have our cherished dreams. Thank you
ReplyDelete'Sense of contentment' Very truly said.....You mentioned facts in a poetic way!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful dear :)
A burning candle
@ Terri: Thank you so much!:)
ReplyDelete@ Janaki: Thanks!:)
@ Gemma: Thanks a lot!:)
@ Rameshji: Thanks!:)
ReplyDelete@ MMT: Mostly it’s your hope, positivity, determination, hard work or sometimes destiny, and maybe your dear ones who certainly feel contentment and joy in doing so:) Thank you so much!
@ Ellecee: Thanks!:)
@ Valli: Thank you!:)
Well written haiku set. And what a cool blog layout, Tarang!
ReplyDeleteTarang, this is lovely. I like your inspirational line in "A new horizon" ... although, might I suggest in keeping with the ABC CDE EFA form SiS requested ... change A new horizon to your first line The joy of giving! Here is my Day 23.
ReplyDeleteHappy Thursday!
I like the joy of giving...But if you don't mind, since we are following a pattern ~
ReplyDeleteTweak the last line to:
Cherished wish and dreams
Keep hopes alight, offering
The joy of giving (same as the first line)
Happy day :-)
@ Vidya: Thank you so much!:)
ReplyDelete@ Becca & Grace: I wanted to repeat the first line in order to maintain the pattern but don't you think it will lose its meaning? I thought so that’s why I preferred “A new horizon”
Thank you so much for your suggestions and such nice comments!:)
Have a nice day:)
very beautiful said.. Loved it..
ReplyDeleteHave to agree with Terri.
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