Saturday, March 3, 2012

Tricks of fate





Tricks of fate confuse
human mind, sorrow and joy
Two phases of life



Written for Haiku Heights
Shared@ Poets United


22 comments:

  1. maybe one should be wary of the tricks it plays, though it comes unexpectedly! :) good one!

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  2. Well done Tarang. Wonderfully crafted haiku. Thanks for sharing.

    Namaste

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  3. I would be confused too with tricks of fate~ Nice one ~

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  4. ya,, interchanging phases of life..

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  5. it's like life is trying to trick you left and right

    senryu of lost soldiers

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  6. Life expressed so well ~ great photo also ^_^ ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  7. Fate can be such a temperamental wench with its decisions! :)

    Nicely done!

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  8. nice haiku and so true... weird how our life is divided between joy and sorrow. they are the two halves of a circle... if one ends, the other begins.

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  9. @ Leo: Well-said:) Thank you!

    @ Chèvrefeuille: Thank you! Glad you liked it. Namaste:)

    @ Grace: Thanks!:)

    @ Janaki: Thank you!:)

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  10. @ Ruchi: Yes. Thanks for visiting:)

    @ Karen: Thank you!:)

    @ Zongrik: Yes. Thanks!:)

    @ Carol: Thank you so much! Namaste:)

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  11. @ Becca: Thank you!:)

    @ Neha: Very well-said! Thanks:)

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  12. Two phases which can sometimes overlap perhaps..thought provoking haiku..Jae

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  13. Tricks or fate...confusing for sure. great haiku

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  14. Tricks of fate do confuse but so do heartfelt emotions.

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  15. @ Jae: Yes, perhaps. Thank you!:)

    @ Susie: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Booguloo: Maybe...sometimes. Thanks:)

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  16. When fate starts tricking us, we need to become trickier still, I think!

    Fate Has Blessed Them

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  17. @ MMT: Smart thinking but sometimes we feel helpless and confused:)

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  18. Wow! The last line stopped me cold, when I saw the great difference between sorrow and joy and how quickly those feelings can turn. You beautifully captured it!

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  19. tricks of fate indeed! they said fate is in your hands, but sometimes, is it? :)

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  20. @ Christine: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

    Dsnake1: Sometimes it seems to be slipping from our grip:)

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