Monday, February 11, 2013

Let me be with you...

Hugging myself tightly
I struggle to fight the pain
Melancholy possess my heart
And it shriveled with congestion
Clogged throat tries to swallow the hurt pride
But it's painful
A friendly voice echoes from within
And reassures
"Let me be with you...
I can't promise to ebb away your anguish
But I'll soak it and lighten your heart" it says
Finally, I keep my stubbornness aside
And I set that voice free....
It pricks my eyes and appears
And warm rivulet of tears keeps its words
Twinge in my heart melts away....slowly

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32 Comments:

Sri Valli said...

"Let me be with you...
I can't promise to ebb away your anguish
But I'll soak it and lighten your heart"

Touching lines...Tears lifts off burden in our hearts....So true!

Beautiful poem Tarang!

rudraprayaga said...

The words fathomed the heart.

Saru Singhal said...

I wish, it was so easy to ease off pain. A beautiful poem, surely one of the best on your blog Tarang.

Tarang Sinha said...

Glad you liked these lines...Thank you so much Valli!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

:) Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Saru!!!:)

Reshma said...

Even though its not easy, sometimes letting go of whatever you have been restraining in your mind relieves and soothes you...You have brought out the helpless anguish beautifully...

Reshma said...

Drobbed by again to tell you that I have nominated you for the popular Liebster Award Tarang!!
http://cerebralbabbling.blogspot.com/2013/02/my-first-award-liebster.html

Green Speck said...

Pain can be tough at times ... but I love how your poem concludes !!!

Jyoti Mishra said...

we all seek solace in diff things when we deal with pain..
question is does it helps ?
beautifully written tarang...

Tarang Sinha said...

You're right Reshma! Glad you liked this poem. Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Reshma for this honour!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

You're right Jyoti! Glad you liked this poem. Thank you!:)

aliasgarmukhtiar mukhtiar said...

Nice one

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks!:)

Gayu said...

Huh..the pain of a hurt heart...beautifully penned:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

A comforting message in that voice and this poem:)

VaNdAnA ShArMa said...

Sometimes just being there is enough............beautiful emotions.......

Lisa A. Williams said...

A beautifully penned poem

Laurie Kolp said...

I think it's wonderful how many wrote about the voice within... which should be the only one we listen to.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot Vandana!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks Lisa!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

:) Glad you liked it. Thank you!:)

Kim Nelson said...

I love that friendly voice. Thank goodness it speaks up in tough times.

http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2013/04/25/silence/

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes, it speaks up in tough times & gives us relief:)

Robyn Greenhouse said...

It's always nice when others can help lift ones spirits!

Mary said...

Love the idea of setting that VOICE free. It will always be there when you need it!

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes, you're right Robyn!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Mary!:)

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