My Translation

Thursday, November 14, 2013

When 'our' dreams smiled

                                         

                                                   You...

My eyes still sting with that pain
When they saw you going...mercilessly
My body still feels the last trembling touch
When mistrust tore us apart
I curse that storm
That swept my happiness away
I waited for you...to come back
You turned and stretched your arms wide
With tender affection
Alas! that was a sweet illusion
Time caressed the wound soothingly
But, embers of emotions
Still breathe in my heart
Yearn to embrace the moments of togetherness
One last time
When 'our' dreams smiled



Written For:  Write Tribe
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33 comments:

  1. Jyoti MishraNovember 14, 2013 at 9:34 AM

    it's strange.. sometime old love give us smiles and some times... pain

    beautiful verses..
    hope u r doing fine tarang..
    it's been long since my last visit :).

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    1. Tarang SinhaNovember 14, 2013 at 10:10 AM

      True! Thanks Jyoti! Yes, I'm good actually happy and excited as I'm waiting for 'Uff Ye Emotions'!:)

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    2. Jyoti MishraNovember 14, 2013 at 10:33 AM

      yeah I just liked its Fb page :)
      m so happy for u..
      how can I get it to read ?

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    3. Tarang SinhaNovember 14, 2013 at 10:36 AM

      Thank you so much Jyoti!

      You can buy online like any other book or you can pre-order (On discount). I've given the link below. Thanks for showing your interest!:)

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  2. Vandana SharmaNovember 14, 2013 at 10:59 AM

    It is so heartening to know that it will be the last time only:(

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    1. Tarang SinhaNovember 15, 2013 at 2:02 AM

      When there's zero possibility, what anyone can ask for?

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  3. alan1704November 14, 2013 at 1:16 PM

    embers of emotion - love this, so full and rich, really alive with feeling.

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  4. Sumana RoyNovember 14, 2013 at 9:26 PM

    love this deep yearning.....

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  5. kalpana solsiNovember 15, 2013 at 12:54 AM

    But, embers of emotions
    Still breathe in my heart

    beautiful words.

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  6. MaryNovember 15, 2013 at 12:56 AM

    Last times are always memorable times. I like "one last time when our dreams smiled."

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    1. Tarang SinhaNovember 15, 2013 at 2:05 AM

      Yes, they are...
      Glad you liked it. Thanks Mary!:)

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  7. PeggyNovember 15, 2013 at 1:48 AM

    Some wonderful images in this and the feelings read very well. Thanks for posting this.

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  8. Tarang SinhaNovember 15, 2013 at 2:04 AM

    Thank you so much Bijayalaxmi!:)

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  9. Mary Ann PotterNovember 15, 2013 at 6:46 AM

    Your image of embers of emotions resonates with me. Yes, they remain for a long time. I enjoyed reading your work!

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  10. NamrataNovember 15, 2013 at 9:22 AM

    Long lost love...heartachingly nostalgic..if anyone doesn't know how it feels then he/she should read the above lines...majestically beautiful :)

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  11. humbirdNovember 15, 2013 at 7:54 PM

    WE're walking the life with the sting in the eyes....and every new will remind, compared to first one..~ poignant poem

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  12. ReshmaNovember 16, 2013 at 5:55 AM

    Better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all...Nicely done Tarang:)

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  13. rudraprayagaNovember 16, 2013 at 2:49 PM

    I loved reading these lines.

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  14. UnknownNovember 16, 2013 at 3:39 PM

    Embers of emotions - I like this line!

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  15. Laurie KolpNovember 16, 2013 at 11:48 PM

    I sure can relate!

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  16. Vishal BheerooNovember 23, 2013 at 11:20 PM

    There are certain bruises that remain with us and love hurts. Well written post and relatable:)
    Cheerz
    www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2013/11/17/letter-unsent-5-neither-do-i-forgive-nor-forget

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