Thursday, November 14, 2013

When 'our' dreams smiled

                                         

                                                   You...

My eyes still sting with that pain
When they saw you going...mercilessly
My body still feels the last trembling touch
When mistrust tore us apart
I curse that storm
That swept my happiness away
I waited for you...to come back
You turned and stretched your arms wide
With tender affection
Alas! that was a sweet illusion
Time caressed the wound soothingly
But, embers of emotions
Still breathe in my heart
Yearn to embrace the moments of togetherness
One last time
When 'our' dreams smiled



Written For:  Write Tribe
                             Theme Thursday
                      Poetry Jam


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34 Comments:

Jyoti Mishra said...

it's strange.. sometime old love give us smiles and some times... pain

beautiful verses..
hope u r doing fine tarang..
it's been long since my last visit :).

Tarang Sinha said...

True! Thanks Jyoti! Yes, I'm good actually happy and excited as I'm waiting for 'Uff Ye Emotions'!:)

Jyoti Mishra said...

yeah I just liked its Fb page :)
m so happy for u..
how can I get it to read ?

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Jyoti!

You can buy online like any other book or you can pre-order (On discount). I've given the link below. Thanks for showing your interest!:)

Vandana Sharma said...

It is so heartening to know that it will be the last time only:(

alan1704 said...

embers of emotion - love this, so full and rich, really alive with feeling.

Sumana Roy said...

love this deep yearning.....

Bijaylaxmi said...

Nice poem rich with tender feelings. Enjoyed the read dear Tarang. Appraises.

Kalpana Solsi said...

But, embers of emotions
Still breathe in my heart

beautiful words.

Mary said...

Last times are always memorable times. I like "one last time when our dreams smiled."

Peggy said...

Some wonderful images in this and the feelings read very well. Thanks for posting this.

Tarang Sinha said...

When there's zero possibility, what anyone can ask for?

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks Sumana!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Bijayalaxmi!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Kalpana!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes, they are...
Glad you liked it. Thanks Mary!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you very much Peggy!:)

Mary Ann Potter said...

Your image of embers of emotions resonates with me. Yes, they remain for a long time. I enjoyed reading your work!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot Mary!:)

Namrata said...

Long lost love...heartachingly nostalgic..if anyone doesn't know how it feels then he/she should read the above lines...majestically beautiful :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much for such a nice comment!:)

humbird said...

WE're walking the life with the sting in the eyes....and every new will remind, compared to first one..~ poignant poem

Reshma said...

Better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all...Nicely done Tarang:)

rudraprayaga said...

I loved reading these lines.

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Embers of emotions - I like this line!

Laurie Kolp said...

I sure can relate!

Ranveer vishal said...

There are certain bruises that remain with us and love hurts. Well written post and relatable:)
Cheerz
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http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2013/11/17/letter-unsent-5-neither-do-i-forgive-nor-forget

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

True! Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Happy to know this! Thank you:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Robyn!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

And I'm glad!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Ranveer!:)

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