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Sunday, September 25, 2016

The Feeling of Love



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The Feeling of love
Crisp like misty daybreak, warm
Like morning sunshine.

Roseate hues of dawn
Reflect love, warmth of sunshine
Kisses tender dew!


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17 comments:

  1. J CSeptember 25, 2016 at 4:19 PM

    really lovely thoughts :)

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  2. Jae RoseSeptember 25, 2016 at 4:48 PM

    I love the contrasting images and feelings - very effective

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  3. ✿September 25, 2016 at 9:22 PM

    This is gorgeous! "Roseate" is one of my favorite words. :)

    Because I was just reading, and looking up videos, about her yesterday, I see "Misty Day" (from American Horror Story: Coven) tucked away in this piece.

    I love the idea of "breaking warm." Like "breaking ground" on something new, by opening up the sun and spilling its light/love/warmth on everyone.

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  4. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 25, 2016 at 11:15 PM

    Very beautiful writing! Gorgeous.

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  5. Sanaa RizviSeptember 25, 2016 at 11:44 PM

    Beautifully written ❤️

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  6. Tarang SinhaSeptember 26, 2016 at 12:52 AM

    @ JC: Thank you! :)

    @ Jae Rose: Glad you found it effective. Thank you! :)

    @ Lavender: It's my favourite too :) Thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment! :)

    @ Sherry: Glad. Thank you very much! :)

    @ Sanaa: Thank you!Glad you liked it :)

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  7. brudbergSeptember 26, 2016 at 1:07 AM

    Love how you blended love with nature...

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  8. ZQSeptember 26, 2016 at 1:20 AM

    A wonderful kiss...
    ZQ

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  9. JulianSeptember 26, 2016 at 1:26 AM

    Lovely poetry

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  10. MarySeptember 26, 2016 at 3:10 AM

    Oh, this makes my heart sing!

    http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2016/09/reflection.html

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  11. Old EggSeptember 26, 2016 at 5:25 AM

    I like the "Kisses tender dew"!

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  12. Dr. Vandana SharmaSeptember 26, 2016 at 10:20 AM

    Such a tender beautiful love, a time spent for eternity like this.........

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  13. UtpalSeptember 26, 2016 at 2:58 PM

    Beautiful pic and melodious Haiku

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  14. Tarang SinhaSeptember 26, 2016 at 3:59 PM

    @ Brudberg: Glad you noticed that! Thank you :)

    @ Garon: :)

    @ Julian: Thanks! :)

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  15. Tarang SinhaSeptember 26, 2016 at 4:02 PM

    @ Mary: Oh, happy to know that! Your lovely comment makes me feel good. Thank you!

    @ Old Egg: Thanks! :)

    @ Vandana: Thank you! :)

    @ Utpal: Thanks! :)

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  16. rebeccaSeptember 26, 2016 at 11:27 PM

    poetry in motion-sweeping me away!

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  17. rudraprayagaSeptember 27, 2016 at 1:29 PM

    Beautiful!

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