Sunday, September 25, 2016

The Feeling of Love







The Feeling of love
Crisp like misty daybreak, warm
Like morning sunshine.

Roseate hues of dawn
Reflect love, warmth of sunshine
Kisses tender dew!


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17 Comments:

J C said...

really lovely thoughts :)

Jae Rose said...

I love the contrasting images and feelings - very effective

lavender said...

This is gorgeous! "Roseate" is one of my favorite words. :)

Because I was just reading, and looking up videos, about her yesterday, I see "Misty Day" (from American Horror Story: Coven) tucked away in this piece.

I love the idea of "breaking warm." Like "breaking ground" on something new, by opening up the sun and spilling its light/love/warmth on everyone.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Very beautiful writing! Gorgeous.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Beautifully written ❤️

Tarang Sinha said...

@ JC: Thank you! :)

@ Jae Rose: Glad you found it effective. Thank you! :)

@ Lavender: It's my favourite too :) Thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment! :)

@ Sherry: Glad. Thank you very much! :)

@ Sanaa: Thank you!Glad you liked it :)

brudberg said...

Love how you blended love with nature...

R.K. Garon said...

A wonderful kiss...
ZQ

Julian said...

Lovely poetry

Mary said...

Oh, this makes my heart sing!

http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2016/09/reflection.html

Old Egg said...

I like the "Kisses tender dew"!

Vandana Sharma said...

Such a tender beautiful love, a time spent for eternity like this.........

Utpal said...

Beautiful pic and melodious Haiku

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Brudberg: Glad you noticed that! Thank you :)

@ Garon: :)

@ Julian: Thanks! :)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Mary: Oh, happy to know that! Your lovely comment makes me feel good. Thank you!

@ Old Egg: Thanks! :)

@ Vandana: Thank you! :)

@ Utpal: Thanks! :)

rebecca said...

poetry in motion-sweeping me away!

rudraprayaga said...

Beautiful!

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