Saturday, January 21, 2012

Future...




Future devises
Plans, Curiosity tiptoes
Couldn’t scan anything.

         Haiku My Heart




9 comments:

  1. A modern times haiku on "tiptoe", well done.

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  2. I try to second guess the future ~

    Nice one ~

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  3. "Couldn't scan anything"

    You mean your scanner doesn't work? Don't you just hate it when the electronics break down?

    Shadowy Path

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  4. @ Chèvrefeuille: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

    @ Teressa: Thanks:)

    @ Grace: Scanning future is difficult. Thanks for liking this one:)

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  5. Shot and so deep... you have proved that long sentences are nothing but sham when it comes to poetry...
    keep goin dea...

    take care
    niya

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  6. @ MMT: No, I don’t mean electronic scanner here obviously (My scanner works perfectly) and yes, I just hate it when things don’t work properly.

    @ Judith: Thank you so much for liking it!:)

    @ Niya: Thanks a lot!:)

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  7. Ahh, those future devices. They are the death of us. I enjoyed your Haiku!

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