Eyes...
Twinkling and sparkling eyes.
The best part of one’s feature
The earnest viewer of all the creatures
They talk without any word
It can sense all the feelings,
those are unheard.
But think of those lives
Who lives in the darkness
Unable to see this colorful world
And repent on their feebleness
You can light up the other lives
Getting beautiful vibes
Come on …
Become an eye donor
And live a life after life.
Submitted to: Magpie Tales
That was wonderful I love the eye donor part too. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat campaign for eye donors:-)
ReplyDeleteDonating one's eyes is a most generous gift.
ReplyDelete"...and live a life after life." A wonderful line.
ReplyDeleteI think you should consider sending this to the organ donation center...They might be interested.
Excellent write!
ReplyDeleteLovely creative page, love it :)
Palindrome poems
Interesting take on this prompt. And good advice, we all should donate.
ReplyDeleteI truly thank you all for such nice comments! I'm glad you all liked it:)
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem and I know someone who did that when they died. It is a truly beautiful thing to do for another person. I am a donor of any or all parts after I die.
ReplyDeleteGreat way to remind others that eye donors give the miracle of sight .
ReplyDeleteExcellent stuff.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Very good. Excellent poetic reminder.
ReplyDeleteI love the concept of eyes communicating its so true. Lovely message =)
ReplyDeleteI thank you all for your appreciation. I'm glad you all liked it!:)
ReplyDelete"repent on their feebleness"
ReplyDeletethis is a good line...i liked it.