Tuesday, November 16, 2010



Twinkling and sparkling eyes.
The best part of one’s feature
The earnest viewer of all the creatures
They talk without any word
It can sense all the feelings,
 those are unheard.
But think of those lives
Who lives in the darkness
Unable to see this colorful world
And repent on their feebleness
You can light up the other lives
Getting beautiful vibes
Come on
Become an eye donor
And live a life after life.

Submitted to: Magpie Tales
                         : Monday Morning Writing Prompt




Grammy said...

That was wonderful I love the eye donor part too. :)

jabblog said...

Great campaign for eye donors:-)

Tess Kincaid said...

Donating one's eyes is a most generous gift.

Sioux said...

"...and live a life after life." A wonderful line.

I think you should consider sending this to the organ donation center...They might be interested.

Marinela said...

Excellent write!
Lovely creative page, love it :)

Palindrome poems

Mary said...

Interesting take on this prompt. And good advice, we all should donate.

Tarang said...

I truly thank you all for such nice comments! I'm glad you all liked it:)

Kristen Haskell said...

Wonderful poem and I know someone who did that when they died. It is a truly beautiful thing to do for another person. I am a donor of any or all parts after I die.

Ann Grenier said...

Great way to remind others that eye donors give the miracle of sight .

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Excellent stuff.

Anna :o]

Henry Clemmons said...

Very good. Excellent poetic reminder.

mindlovemisery said...

I love the concept of eyes communicating its so true. Lovely message =)

Tarang Sinha said...

I thank you all for your appreciation. I'm glad you all liked it!:)

Arian Tejano said...

"repent on their feebleness"

this is a good line...i liked it.

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