Monday, March 7, 2011

A child!



                   Eyes filled with eternal dreams,
                   Forming so many ambitions.
                   Innocent heart
                   Brimming with raw emotions.
                   A child is a figure of honesty.

                   Stubborn act, bolshie’s mood
                   It’s easy, for them, to get vexed.
                   Gleaming tears in a moment
                   And an enchanting smile in next.
                   A child is a figure of volatility

                   Excitement in every bits and pieces,
                   Expressive eyes widens in surprises.
                   All the fears of darkness dashes away
                   With the thrilling bedtime stories.
                   A child is a figure of curiosity.



                 Written for Monday's Child
                                    Sunday Scribblings



14 comments:

  1. I love how you've woven the two prompts together for this piece. It's both an entertaining delight to read and an equal mix of truths/facts about children. Well done!

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  2. Oh, I just love that. You could have been writing about our young Daniel. Kids are absolutely smashing!

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  3. Very strong piece- the end statements of each verse really sang out..Jae

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  4. Wonderful and so very true :o)

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  5. You have captured so well the mind of a child as they absorb the world around them. A really beautiful poem.

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  6. A child truly is a figure of curiousity...thank you for posting at Monday's Child..bkm

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  7. I truly thank you all for your nice comments!:)

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  8. Woww Beautiful :) :) Your Write Up Reminded of The Bedtime Stories Which MY Mom & Dad Would Tell Me & I Would Be Very Much Curious To Know The Ending As Well As Find Out The Moral of The Said Story :) :)

    Thanks A Lot For Sharing :) :)

    Belated International Women's Day Wishes Dear :) :)

    Have A Good Day :) :)

    Takecare,
    Creativity.

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  9. Bedtime stories really hold a special place in every child's heart. Thanks and same to you:)

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  10. nice combination of the two prompts. curiosity is always there no matter the age. have a lovely day.

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  11. Lovely truth about a child..you absolutely got it!!

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  12. the bubbles make one smile.

    superbly creative.
    :)

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