My Translation

Wednesday, March 16, 2011

I wonder!



Image from Google


Sky suffused with roseate hues
Flock of birds creating nice views
Mellow breeze tickling curls
Bevies of chuckling girls
All these pleasing things
Enhance the charm of evening
But, I wonder!
The charisma of dusk,
Never fascinates me.

It reminds me of memories, 
Mirth and melody 
... that I miss                                  

It permeates my visage with gloom
Never allows my heart to bloom
It makes me feel a void within me,
Recall the dreams, now I could not see.
I wonder…
The charisma of dusk,
Never fascinates me.



Submitted to: 3WW  
                           (Breeze, Mellow and Tickle)
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17 comments:

  1. Jae RoseMarch 16, 2011 at 6:08 PM

    Yes, very enticing..I love how you worked all three prompts into the same line as well..expertly done..Jae :)

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  2. Tarang SinhaMarch 16, 2011 at 6:40 PM

    Thank you so much Jae!:)

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  3. DeborahMarch 16, 2011 at 7:22 PM

    Very well done, rich with colour... as is the glorious picture!

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  4. Tarang SinhaMarch 16, 2011 at 8:04 PM

    Thank you so much Deborah!:)

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  5. Sheilagh LeeMarch 16, 2011 at 8:43 PM

    Sheilagh Lee said"It reminds me the memories that I missed."
    That says it all.Very well written You paint the picture so brilliantly.

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  6. CreativityMarch 16, 2011 at 11:05 PM

    Woww Sooo Beautiful Inspiring Relaxing write up :) :)

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  7. Tarang SinhaMarch 17, 2011 at 12:01 PM

    Thanks a lot Sheilagh & Creativity!:)

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  8. shailMarch 17, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    Strangely enough, the dusk does bring gloom to me. Well done.

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  9. Tarang SinhaMarch 18, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    It's really strange! Thanks.

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  10. The Poetry BinMarch 18, 2011 at 12:34 PM

    Well done on your use of the three words, and great poem too! Thank you.

    The Poetry Bin

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  11. Tarang SinhaMarch 18, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    Thank you so much The Poetry Bin!

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  12. AnonymousMarch 31, 2011 at 8:19 AM

    beautiful wonders.
    sorry for missing all 3ww entries.

    busy with poets rally preparations, commenting, and stuff...
    cheers.

    love your attitude.

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  13. MMarch 31, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    Like the way you end ur stanzas...

    Thanks

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  14. Tarang SinhaMarch 31, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    Thanks a lot Jingle & M:)

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  15. Matthew John DaviesApril 27, 2012 at 3:01 AM

    Wonderful, Tarang.

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  16. EllaMay 2, 2012 at 1:24 AM

    So beautiful and rich with color and thoughts, that sprang to life!
    Well Done

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  17. Tarang SinhaMay 2, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    @ Matthew John: Thank you!:)

    @ Ella: Thank you very much!:)

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