Wednesday, March 16, 2011

I wonder!

Image from Google

Sky suffused with roseate hues
Flock of birds creating nice views
Mellow breeze tickling curls
Bevies of chuckling girls
All these pleasing things
Enhance the charm of evening
But, I wonder!
The charisma of dusk,
Never fascinates me.

It reminds me of memories, 
Mirth and melody 
... that I miss                                  

It permeates my visage with gloom
Never allows my heart to bloom
It makes me feel a void within me,
Recall the dreams, now I could not see.
I wonder…
The charisma of dusk,
Never fascinates me.

Submitted to: 3WW  
                           (Breeze, Mellow and Tickle)
Shared@ Poets United



jaerose said...

Yes, very enticing..I love how you worked all three prompts into the same line as well..expertly done..Jae :)

Tarang said...

Thank you so much Jae!:)

Deborah said...

Very well done, rich with colour... as is the glorious picture!

Tarang said...

Thank you so much Deborah!:)

Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within said...

Sheilagh Lee said"It reminds me the memories that I missed."
That says it all.Very well written You paint the picture so brilliantly.

Creativity!! said...

Woww Sooo Beautiful Inspiring Relaxing write up :) :)

Tarang said...

Thanks a lot Sheilagh & Creativity!:)

shail said...

Strangely enough, the dusk does bring gloom to me. Well done.

Tarang said...

It's really strange! Thanks.

The Poetry Bin said...

Well done on your use of the three words, and great poem too! Thank you.

The Poetry Bin

Tarang said...

Thank you so much The Poetry Bin!

Jingle Poetry said...

beautiful wonders.
sorry for missing all 3ww entries.

busy with poets rally preparations, commenting, and stuff...

love your attitude.

M said...

Like the way you end ur stanzas...


Tarang said...

Thanks a lot Jingle & M:)

Matthew John Davies said...

Wonderful, Tarang.

Ella said...

So beautiful and rich with color and thoughts, that sprang to life!
Well Done

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Matthew John: Thank you!:)

@ Ella: Thank you very much!:)

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