Pleasure and pride.
At first you may not succeed,
But with growing zest and effort,
You can take the success in your stride.
The taste of success is sweet,
Rich in delight and contentment.
You may face trouble at first,
But with growing confidence,
It persuades the luck in new direction.
You’re not going to give up,
Make it loud and clear.
You may have to take pain in making attempts,
But with growing determination,
Success gives you the opportunity to cheer.
Very well done with the prompts, Tarang!
ReplyDeleteWish you all the 'success'.:-)
Extremely well written and well expressed poems. It is certain that success must be worked for, and disappointments overcome. I very much liked your three-liner.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Saugraamzindagi & Old Altonian. I'm glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteLovely! Perfect expression.
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Very engaging poems lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Khadeeja & Fear Not...!:)
ReplyDeleteVery nice piece of reflective poetry, through much discernment we find the success from within our own souls, and magnanimously through conflict and even suffrage. I really enjoyed and thank you.
ReplyDeleteLoved them both, you use of Ebb is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Wellspring... & Amanda!:)
ReplyDeleteNicely accomplished.
ReplyDeleteNice...
ReplyDeleteHere is my 3WW:
don't be shocked, I can handle power tools
Thank you so much Beccagivens & Gautami:)
ReplyDeleteBig Cheer! Trying is 99% of success that's for sure..Jae ;)
ReplyDeleteYou captured the 3 prompts very well.
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
Thanks Jae & Andy:)
ReplyDeleteI think a lot of people need to read this in the middle of their despondency. It will encourage them not to give up. Well done.
ReplyDeleteVery positive, and if I wasn't such a cynic lately I might have enjoyed it. Good writing, though. Good form. I like that you admitted to pain near the end, there. I appreciate that.
ReplyDeletea Very positive approach on success. Thank you :)
ReplyDeletei guess it is all in how you define success...but it certainly can be sweet...smiles..
ReplyDeleteSuccess is sweet.
ReplyDeleteEngaging write, I enjoyed reading this. Everyone has their own definitions of success, but I thinks its safe to say nearly all will agree on its sweetness.
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