My Translation

Thursday, July 21, 2011

Eyes are that mirror...



Eyes are that mirror
Which reflects the emotions
Can’t be mistaken.

Your enchanting eyes
Have painted the whispers of
True Love On my soul

I heard the music
Which you intended to hide
Your telltale eyes played it.



Submitted to: The Purple Treehouse
                           Haiku My Heart

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23 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJuly 21, 2011 at 6:44 PM

    eyes are that mirror indeed, well done Haikus,
    Thanks for sharing.

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJuly 21, 2011 at 6:44 PM

    eyes are that mirror indeed, well done Haikus,
    Thanks for sharing.

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  3. Jack Edwards PoetryJuly 22, 2011 at 12:33 AM

    Great poem. Loved the last line.

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  4. AnonymousJuly 22, 2011 at 1:25 AM

    the eyes will do that. nice

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  5. Tarang SinhaJuly 22, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    Thanks a lot Jingle, Jack & Blackswan. Glad you liked it!

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  6. SpadomanJuly 22, 2011 at 3:31 PM

    I love all three of these haiku. What fabulous images I "see" with your words. I don't need a mirror. Great stuff!

    Peace

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  7. SnapJuly 22, 2011 at 6:34 PM

    Eyes are a mirror. They tell us so much ...

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  8. RosieJuly 22, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    The eyes mirror the soul... and you captured that perfectly here. =)

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  9. Vinay Leo R.July 22, 2011 at 7:22 PM

    All quite beautiful.. My favorite was the first one!

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  10. rebeccaJuly 22, 2011 at 7:24 PM

    welcome tarang,
    and thank you for this climate of love. the idea of eyes so full of love they play music upon another's soul...is stunning.
    so glad you are here.

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  11. Ramesh SoodJuly 22, 2011 at 8:07 PM

    Ah, to be able to here the music of the eyes..with eyes.. well done!!! Have a look at my entry on HMH.. for happiness..

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  12. Anna :o]July 23, 2011 at 1:44 AM

    Lovely stuff Tarang - lovely.

    Anna :o]

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  13. ScarletJuly 23, 2011 at 6:33 AM

    Nice form... I haven't done the haiku yet ~

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  14. AnonymousJuly 23, 2011 at 8:59 AM

    That is lovely, Tarang! The last line, in particular, is beautifully resonant.

    I know about those musical eyes!

    My haiku is here: www.shawnbird.com/summer-rain

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  15. AnonymousJuly 23, 2011 at 8:59 AM

    That is lovely, Tarang! The last line, in particular, is beautifully resonant.

    I know about those musical eyes!

    My haiku is here: www.shawnbird.com/summer-rain

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  16. Fran aka RedondowriterJuly 23, 2011 at 9:48 AM

    Very lovely words. Thanks for giving us insight into yourself.

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  17. Tarang SinhaJuly 23, 2011 at 11:51 AM

    I truly thank you 'all' for your such nice heartwarming comments. I'm glad you all liked it, It's really encouraging:)

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  18. LeslieJuly 23, 2011 at 7:16 PM

    i especially like your first haiku... and i believe that eyes are, indeed, the mirror of the soul...

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  19. miss pieJuly 24, 2011 at 4:23 AM

    i love that eyes are the windows to our souls.... beautiful revelation of words we can all subscribe to...

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  20. AnonymousJuly 24, 2011 at 8:14 AM

    amazing.


    How are you?

    Welcome join us for week 6 short story slam fun,

    Bless you..

    Keep it up!

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  21. tamiJuly 24, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    i hear your music! lovely, lovely.

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  22. AnonymousJuly 24, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    This is really gorgeous!

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  23. AnonymousJuly 26, 2011 at 8:47 AM

    apt Haikus.
    well done.


    Greetings:

    Welcome sharing your poetry with us today.

    Poems that are old but need more attention, poems related to nature and life are welcome.

    Keep up the excellence.
    Hope to see you linked in and share.

    BEST!
    xoxox

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