Thursday, July 21, 2011

Eyes are that mirror...



Eyes are that mirror
Which reflects the emotions
Can’t be mistaken.

Your enchanting eyes
Have painted the whispers of
True Love On my soul

I heard the music
Which you intended to hide
Your telltale eyes played it.



Submitted to: The Purple Treehouse
                           Haiku My Heart


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23 Comments:

Jingle said...

eyes are that mirror indeed, well done Haikus,
Thanks for sharing.

Jingle said...

eyes are that mirror indeed, well done Haikus,
Thanks for sharing.

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Great poem. Loved the last line.

blackswanpoetry said...

the eyes will do that. nice

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot Jingle, Jack & Blackswan. Glad you liked it!

Spadoman said...

I love all three of these haiku. What fabulous images I "see" with your words. I don't need a mirror. Great stuff!

Peace

Snap said...

Eyes are a mirror. They tell us so much ...

Rosie said...

The eyes mirror the soul... and you captured that perfectly here. =)

Leo said...

All quite beautiful.. My favorite was the first one!

rebecca said...

welcome tarang,
and thank you for this climate of love. the idea of eyes so full of love they play music upon another's soul...is stunning.
so glad you are here.

Ramesh Sood said...

Ah, to be able to here the music of the eyes..with eyes.. well done!!! Have a look at my entry on HMH.. for happiness..

Anna :o] said...

Lovely stuff Tarang - lovely.

Anna :o]

Heaven said...

Nice form... I haven't done the haiku yet ~

shawnbird.com said...

That is lovely, Tarang! The last line, in particular, is beautifully resonant.

I know about those musical eyes!

My haiku is here: www.shawnbird.com/summer-rain

shawnbird.com said...

That is lovely, Tarang! The last line, in particular, is beautifully resonant.

I know about those musical eyes!

My haiku is here: www.shawnbird.com/summer-rain

Fran aka Redondowriter said...

Very lovely words. Thanks for giving us insight into yourself.

Tarang Sinha said...

I truly thank you 'all' for your such nice heartwarming comments. I'm glad you all liked it, It's really encouraging:)

Leslie said...

i especially like your first haiku... and i believe that eyes are, indeed, the mirror of the soul...

miss pie said...

i love that eyes are the windows to our souls.... beautiful revelation of words we can all subscribe to...

Bluebell Books said...

amazing.


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Bless you..

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tami said...

i hear your music! lovely, lovely.

mindlovemisery said...

This is really gorgeous!

Jingle Poetry said...

apt Haikus.
well done.


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