Sunday, July 17, 2011

String of emotion.




Though we’re strangers
Walking through the same pathway
Still, I strongly feel,

That…

We’re captivated
By an inexplicable
String of emotion.



Submitted to: Haiku Heights
 Sahred@ Poets United
                      Poetry Jam
                          



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16 Comments:

California Girl said...

string theory.

beccagivens said...

Nicely done ... strangers and mystery indeed!

Ramesh Sood said...

And it keeps on happening.. may the string prove to be strong.. God bless.. keep smiling and be happier always.

Leo said...

Yes, even strangers share some part of their life in common I guess :)

Thank you for the support to Haiku Heights through the first year :) Looking forward to enjoying more of your haikus next year too!

My Haiku ~ Break Free

The Write Girl said...

Two strong haikus. I like the final lines. Nicely written.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot California girl and Becca:)

@ Ramesh Sood: Yeah, it happens. Thanks a lot.

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Leo: I also enjoy writing haikus 'now' & I’ll keep writing for sure. Thanks!


@ The Write Girl: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

mindlovemisery said...

I know this feeling, powerful and beautiful haiku

Christine said...

beautiful

Ella said...

You tied your thoughts nicely together~
I really enjoyed this! Beautiful~

Mary Mansfield said...

Loved this! Very nicely balanced between the two halves of the poem.

Kat Mortensen said...

Lovely response to the prompt.

WinterWrites said...

A haiku I totally agree with

Carrie Burtt said...

I believe this as well Tarang....lovely writing! :-)

janaki nagaraj said...

Lovely.

Mary said...

Hi, you submitted three for Poetry Jam, each one an older work. As we have a week, truly we/ I am only commenting on work that was written for this particular prompt in the spirit of Poetry Jam. Hope you will find your way back with a new work..

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