Reflection of my thoughts and imagination
string theory.
Nicely done ... strangers and mystery indeed!
And it keeps on happening.. may the string prove to be strong.. God bless.. keep smiling and be happier always.
Yes, even strangers share some part of their life in common I guess :)Thank you for the support to Haiku Heights through the first year :) Looking forward to enjoying more of your haikus next year too!My Haiku ~ Break Free
Two strong haikus. I like the final lines. Nicely written.
Thanks a lot California girl and Becca:)@ Ramesh Sood: Yeah, it happens. Thanks a lot.
@ Leo: I also enjoy writing haikus 'now' & I’ll keep writing for sure. Thanks!@ The Write Girl: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.
I know this feeling, powerful and beautiful haiku
You tied your thoughts nicely together~I really enjoyed this! Beautiful~
Loved this! Very nicely balanced between the two halves of the poem.
Lovely response to the prompt.
A haiku I totally agree with
I believe this as well Tarang....lovely writing! :-)
Lovely.
Hi, you submitted three for Poetry Jam, each one an older work. As we have a week, truly we/ I am only commenting on work that was written for this particular prompt in the spirit of Poetry Jam. Hope you will find your way back with a new work..
string theory.
ReplyDeleteNicely done ... strangers and mystery indeed!
ReplyDeleteAnd it keeps on happening.. may the string prove to be strong.. God bless.. keep smiling and be happier always.
ReplyDeleteYes, even strangers share some part of their life in common I guess :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the support to Haiku Heights through the first year :) Looking forward to enjoying more of your haikus next year too!
My Haiku ~ Break Free
Two strong haikus. I like the final lines. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot California girl and Becca:)
ReplyDelete@ Ramesh Sood: Yeah, it happens. Thanks a lot.
@ Leo: I also enjoy writing haikus 'now' & I’ll keep writing for sure. Thanks!
ReplyDelete@ The Write Girl: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.
I know this feeling, powerful and beautiful haiku
ReplyDeleteYou tied your thoughts nicely together~
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this! Beautiful~
Loved this! Very nicely balanced between the two halves of the poem.
ReplyDeleteLovely response to the prompt.
ReplyDeleteA haiku I totally agree with
ReplyDeleteI believe this as well Tarang....lovely writing! :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeleteHi, you submitted three for Poetry Jam, each one an older work. As we have a week, truly we/ I am only commenting on work that was written for this particular prompt in the spirit of Poetry Jam. Hope you will find your way back with a new work..
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