My Translation

Thursday, August 25, 2011

The aura of dusk
















The sky turned rosy
Waves of breeze is doing waltz
Dusk draped the aura

Flocks of vivid birds
Breath of freedom they inhale
Going back to their home










Submitted to: Haiku Heights
                           Haiku My Heart
Also shared@ Ruby Tuesday








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23 comments:

  1. SarasAugust 25, 2011 at 9:46 PM

    Very Picturesque Haiku!

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  2. Jyoti MishraAugust 25, 2011 at 10:56 PM

    A lot said in few lines :)
    Nice job !!

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  3. JJ Roa RodriguezAugust 26, 2011 at 5:33 AM

    "breath of freedom" I love that line.

    JJRod'z

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  4. Maude LynnAugust 26, 2011 at 7:42 AM

    Lovely!

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  5. Judith WesterfieldAugust 26, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    Love the imagery

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  6. Rosie GanAugust 26, 2011 at 10:26 AM

    The breeze doing the waltz, eh? Pretty image!'Going home ' is always a nostalgic theme.
    Rosie

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  7. Tarang SinhaAugust 26, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    I truly thank you all for such nice comments! I'm glad you all liked it.:)

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  8. SpadomanAugust 26, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    Both are very beautiful haiku. The photo has me gazing. I wonder about the birds and how they must feel as they fly. You describe it in a wonderful way, going back to their home inhaling their freedom. Just beautiful

    Peace

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  9. A Bit of the BlarneyAugust 26, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    Beautifully descriptive haikus! Well done. Wishing you a grand weekend! Cathy

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  10. GraceAugust 26, 2011 at 6:14 PM

    I like the image and creative work on the prompt.

    Lovely haiku set ~

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  11. MaritAugust 26, 2011 at 8:13 PM

    Oh my... your pic and haikus leave are breathtaking!

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  12. rebeccaAugust 26, 2011 at 8:48 PM

    your haiku form a lovely story of beauty and home coming.
    thank you for both.

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  13. foxysueAugust 26, 2011 at 9:54 PM

    Oh yes, want to be there, waltzing along ~ beautiful.

    Sue x

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  14. Noelle ClearwaterAugust 27, 2011 at 9:59 AM

    I agree, very beautiful and poetic phrasing that creates a painting with words and your image is beautiful as well. Nicely done!
    Noelle

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  15. Tarang SinhaAugust 27, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    Thank you so much! Your valuable comments mean a lot. I’m glad you all liked it.:)

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  16. Vinay Leo R.August 27, 2011 at 3:53 PM

    I like the waltz of the breeze :) Sounds wonderful, a beautiful haiku duo!

    Mine - Patiently Trying

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  17. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 28, 2011 at 7:10 PM

    Birds going home remind me that I am far away from mine...

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  18. Cassiopeia RisesAugust 30, 2011 at 2:24 AM

    Lovely Haiku and photo.

    Melanie

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  19. Cafe au laitJanuary 10, 2012 at 9:12 PM

    Lovely pic!

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  20. Chubskulit RoseJanuary 11, 2012 at 1:20 AM

    Beautiful!

    New Year's Eve Rubies, please come and see.

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  21. Gemma WisemanJanuary 11, 2012 at 2:52 AM

    So many birds on the wing in silhouette look wonderful against the rosy sky and contrasting landscape silhouettes!

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  22. Leah H.January 12, 2012 at 9:06 PM

    Beautiful photo and you have a beautiful blog too..

    Visiting for RT 2 ! Here's my share- hope you can visit:)

    http://www.cassandrasminicorner.com/2012/01/strawberry-candies.html

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  23. JessicaJanuary 13, 2012 at 6:07 PM

    beautiful sunset :-), was here or Ruby Tuesday 2, hope that you can return the visit too.

    http://www.mommies2ks.com/2012/01/my-little-girls-princess-collection-books.html

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