Thursday, August 25, 2011

The aura of dusk
















The sky turned rosy
Waves of breeze is doing waltz
Dusk draped the aura

Flocks of vivid birds
Breath of freedom they inhale
Going back to their home










Submitted to: Haiku Heights
                           Haiku My Heart
Also shared@ Ruby Tuesday









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23 Comments:

Saras said...

Very Picturesque Haiku!

Jyoti Mishra said...

A lot said in few lines :)
Nice job !!

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

"breath of freedom" I love that line.

JJRod'z

Mama Zen said...

Lovely!

Judith Westerfield said...

Love the imagery

My garden haven said...

The breeze doing the waltz, eh? Pretty image!'Going home ' is always a nostalgic theme.
Rosie

Tarang Sinha said...

I truly thank you all for such nice comments! I'm glad you all liked it.:)

Spadoman said...

Both are very beautiful haiku. The photo has me gazing. I wonder about the birds and how they must feel as they fly. You describe it in a wonderful way, going back to their home inhaling their freedom. Just beautiful

Peace

GrandmaK said...

Beautifully descriptive haikus! Well done. Wishing you a grand weekend! Cathy

Grace said...

I like the image and creative work on the prompt.

Lovely haiku set ~

Marit said...

Oh my... your pic and haikus leave are breathtaking!

rebecca said...

your haiku form a lovely story of beauty and home coming.
thank you for both.

foxysue said...

Oh yes, want to be there, waltzing along ~ beautiful.

Sue x

Noelle Renee said...

I agree, very beautiful and poetic phrasing that creates a painting with words and your image is beautiful as well. Nicely done!
Noelle

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much! Your valuable comments mean a lot. I’m glad you all liked it.:)

Leo said...

I like the waltz of the breeze :) Sounds wonderful, a beautiful haiku duo!

Mine - Patiently Trying

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Birds going home remind me that I am far away from mine...

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Lovely Haiku and photo.

Melanie

Cafe au lait said...

Lovely pic!

chubskulit said...

Beautiful!

New Year's Eve Rubies, please come and see.

Gemma Wiseman said...

So many birds on the wing in silhouette look wonderful against the rosy sky and contrasting landscape silhouettes!

Leah H. said...

Beautiful photo and you have a beautiful blog too..

Visiting for RT 2 ! Here's my share- hope you can visit:)

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wifetoalineman02 said...

beautiful sunset :-), was here or Ruby Tuesday 2, hope that you can return the visit too.

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