Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Beauty of nature unveiled!






The field is dancing
With the melody of mellow breeze
The Beauty of nature unveiled.

Their hard work flourished finally
In the form of golden crop
She chuckles with delight

‘You can beat the poverty’
 Her heart assured her blissfully
 It will bring prosperity.

Mother will beam with contentment
Father won’t have to stoop
Burden of debt will be released.


Submitted to: Short Story Slam


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14 Comments:

Bethe77 said...

Makes me think of harvest time.
Beautifully done I love it!
Blessings

Deborah said...

Wonderful poem.

Jyoti Mishra said...

very beautifully u have unveiled the beauty of nature:)
Nice read !!!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Bethe, Deborah & Jyoti! I'm glad you liked it.

roughwaterjohn said...

I agree, this is wonderfully beautiful!

Kalyan said...

lovely lines...beautifully crafted words!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much John & Kalyan. I'm glad you liked it.

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely, lovely words.

Anna :o]

Morning said...

The field is dancing
With the melody of mellow breeze
The Beauty of nature unveiled.


lovely opening, well done.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

A wonderful perspective on the prompt. Beautifully written poem.

Here is my week 8 story: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/

MISH said...

Even though the character speaks of poverty , I like the positive and hopeful attitude at the end of the poem !

The Cello Strings said...

Hope is on the way, thanks for sharing...

amazing emotions shared.

e.a.s. demers said...

nice one. I love the hopeful tone of the poem.

Lena said...

Boy, does that last line hit the spot! Very well said.

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