My Translation

Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Feather of dreams




Feather touch of hope
Instigates the hidden dreams
Let it fly freely

Silk feather of dreams
Makes unrestricted voyage
Fastest in the world!


For: Haiku Heights
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16 comments:

  1. Susie ClevengerSeptember 20, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    Yes let hope fly freely...I wish my feather of dreams would come...I am an insomniac...great job on both your haikus!

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  2. andy sewinaSeptember 20, 2011 at 4:02 PM

    Hidden dreams, and the silk feather of dreams, wonderful images!

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  3. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarrySeptember 20, 2011 at 8:38 PM

    amazing Haikus.

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  4. SarasSeptember 20, 2011 at 9:37 PM

    Yes Dreams should be allowed to drift freely.

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 21, 2011 at 4:06 AM

    Yes, sometimes the touch of hope is barely discernible, for it is as light as a feather.



    Featherless Pomegranate

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  6. Laurie KolpMarch 15, 2012 at 10:07 PM

    Mmm... I love silk feather of dreams.

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  7. boogulooMarch 15, 2012 at 10:24 PM

    Makes me want to take wing.

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  8. Mark WindhamMarch 16, 2012 at 2:49 AM

    hope flying free with fast dreams, very good.

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  9. Mystic_MomMarch 16, 2012 at 6:35 AM

    Very nicely done, I could feel the textures and enjoyed the read.

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  10. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 16, 2012 at 8:39 AM

    Beautiful. And I love "feather of dreams".

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  11. Tarang SinhaMarch 16, 2012 at 11:23 AM

    @ Susie: Best wishes to you:) Thanks!

    @ Andy: Thank you:)

    @ Morning: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Saras: Yes. Thanks!:)

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  12. Tarang SinhaMarch 16, 2012 at 11:25 AM

    @ MMT: Yes, you're right. Thanks!:)

    @ Laurie: :) Thanks!

    @ Booguloo: :) Thank you!

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  13. Tarang SinhaMarch 16, 2012 at 11:31 AM

    @ Mark: Thank you!:)

    @ Mystic_Mom: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Sherry: Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it:)

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  14. EllaMarch 17, 2012 at 9:40 AM

    Wonderful I love the idea of "feathers of dreams"...clever!

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  15. Tarang SinhaMarch 17, 2012 at 11:57 AM

    Thank you so much Ella! Glad you liked this:)

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  16. rchMarch 18, 2012 at 3:27 PM

    I admire how you explored more than one meaning for feather, that is great when words are used to their full potential.

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