Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Feather of dreams




Feather touch of hope
Instigates the hidden dreams
Let it fly freely

Silk feather of dreams
Makes unrestricted voyage
Fastest in the world!


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16 Comments:

Susie Clevenger said...

Yes let hope fly freely...I wish my feather of dreams would come...I am an insomniac...great job on both your haikus!

andy sewina said...

Hidden dreams, and the silk feather of dreams, wonderful images!

Morning said...

amazing Haikus.

Saras said...

Yes Dreams should be allowed to drift freely.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Yes, sometimes the touch of hope is barely discernible, for it is as light as a feather.



Featherless Pomegranate

Laurie Kolp said...

Mmm... I love silk feather of dreams.

booguloo said...

Makes me want to take wing.

Mark Windham said...

hope flying free with fast dreams, very good.

Mystic_Mom said...

Very nicely done, I could feel the textures and enjoyed the read.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Beautiful. And I love "feather of dreams".

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Susie: Best wishes to you:) Thanks!

@ Andy: Thank you:)

@ Morning: Thanks a lot!:)

@ Saras: Yes. Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ MMT: Yes, you're right. Thanks!:)

@ Laurie: :) Thanks!

@ Booguloo: :) Thank you!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Mark: Thank you!:)

@ Mystic_Mom: Thank you so much!:)

@ Sherry: Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it:)

Ella said...

Wonderful I love the idea of "feathers of dreams"...clever!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Ella! Glad you liked this:)

rch said...

I admire how you explored more than one meaning for feather, that is great when words are used to their full potential.

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