Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Feather of dreams




Feather touch of hope
Instigates the hidden dreams
Let it fly freely

Silk feather of dreams
Makes unrestricted voyage
Fastest in the world!


Shared@ Poets United

16 comments:

  1. Yes let hope fly freely...I wish my feather of dreams would come...I am an insomniac...great job on both your haikus!

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  2. Hidden dreams, and the silk feather of dreams, wonderful images!

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  3. Yes Dreams should be allowed to drift freely.

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  4. Yes, sometimes the touch of hope is barely discernible, for it is as light as a feather.



    Featherless Pomegranate

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  5. Mmm... I love silk feather of dreams.

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  6. hope flying free with fast dreams, very good.

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  7. Very nicely done, I could feel the textures and enjoyed the read.

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  8. Beautiful. And I love "feather of dreams".

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  9. @ Susie: Best wishes to you:) Thanks!

    @ Andy: Thank you:)

    @ Morning: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Saras: Yes. Thanks!:)

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  10. @ MMT: Yes, you're right. Thanks!:)

    @ Laurie: :) Thanks!

    @ Booguloo: :) Thank you!

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  11. @ Mark: Thank you!:)

    @ Mystic_Mom: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Sherry: Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it:)

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  12. Wonderful I love the idea of "feathers of dreams"...clever!

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  13. Thank you so much Ella! Glad you liked this:)

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  14. I admire how you explored more than one meaning for feather, that is great when words are used to their full potential.

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