Breach of promise
Hurts the
Innocent feelings
Agony brews
Inside a tentative heart
Wiping off
All the memories
Is not easy
The embers of emotion
Are still alight.
Fear of failure Causes
Breach of confidence
Misery creeps
Inside a tentative mind
Accepting defeat
Is dreadful
Ultimate effort
Is the only hope
The embers of trust
Are still alight.
For: 3WW
Enjoyed this... they can stand on their own or flow as one.
ReplyDeletethe agony of a heart torn between
ReplyDeletetrusting and possibly a hidden truth.
the agony of a heart that has become indecisive, perhaps thru. mixed signals or hidden truth.
ReplyDeleteWell said, and well-written. Hope can certainly be born of earnest effort.
ReplyDeleteNicely. It's good to see the embers of trust are still alight!!
ReplyDeletethat was so awesome...
ReplyDeletei was just trying to find out my favorite line byt then i'll end up posting the whole poem... what an emotional arrangement of words...
I like the metaphor of emotions and trust as embers. Great work on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteagreed, well done.
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