Monday, October 3, 2011

Fright






                         
Fear of failure
Rises in the heart
Ignites the negativity
Growing qualms flicker
Hope gradually rekindles
Tension relieves slowly.







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20 Comments:

Reflections said...

Fabulous combination! Though the image is simple/hidden well in the arms, the eyes speak of this Fright that your words create.

Susie Clevenger said...

Great job of describing fright..it builds and then is released. I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger's Award:http://confessionsofalaundrygoddess.blogspot.com/2011/10/versatile-blogger-award.html

Jyoti Mishra said...

nice interpretation !!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Reflections: Thank you!:)

@ Susie: Thank you so much Susie for liking this piece & for the nomination!:)

@ Jyoti: Thanks!:)

Bethe77 said...

That is fabulous! I love the take you took with fright! Great job!
Blessings

Jim said...

Very nice, Tarang! ~~ You have the answer to fright but it's still scary until things get better.

This could be a fill-in-the-blank poem, replacing 'failure' with whatever is doing the frightening.
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I did mine on the Halloween vein, dated it Oct 31 but posted it today.
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Harshad Mehta said...

Great work with words!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Harshadji!:)

VaNdAnA ShArMa said...

hope can do wonders...

Tarang Sinha said...

True!!:)

Ramesh Sood said...

Very interestingly created...well done..

Hope you will visit me here Tarang..

http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/05/and-stories-all-spillhaiku.html

RS

Pam Olson said...

I enjoyed your art work and poem. Nice acrostic!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!:)

Maggie Grace said...

Nicely done! Emotionally going from fear to hopeful and being okay. Something most I imagine relate to. I certainly do.

Satya said...

An acrostic poem... My latest obsession... Loved reading it!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Maggie!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes, it's interesting and challenging! Glad you liked it. I would like to read yours. Thank you!:)

Laura said...

beautifully written. Acrostics are challenging, allowing the flow to be and not feel forced... you've accomplished this so well.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much for your appreciation!:)

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