Reflection of my thoughts and imagination
I like your senryu. It says what we all feel...
ur right, life needs space to breath
When allowed to flow.. it finds all the space it wants... but will mind ever permit.. that's the gamut.. nicely put Tarang, you made me think with this..
yes, routine worries n tensions make one feel all choked up n suffocated, We really have to take some time off to breathe!! Like the meaning that "space" holds here.
Oh this is so true ...
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great space sentiments. wow.
Hello.I like that..."life needs space to breathe". Isn't that the truth!Thanks for sharing.Mine: Our Candlelight Of Love
Lovely, and the conciseness of this poem gives the reader space to breathe as well - wonderful!
Amen! So true. Life does require space to breathe. Beautifully written.
Indeed, we all need space now and then
nice poem, love the pic... :)
yaa ,,space to breathe. last line is best.
Nicely said and oh so true.Melanie
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remarkable one, well done.
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