Saturday, December 3, 2011

Life needs space to breathe






                        Image @ It's Thursday


Oppressive worries
Cause stress and tension in life
Life needs space to breathe



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19 Comments:

Gerry/Strummed words said...

I like your senryu. It says what we all feel...

zongrik said...

ur right, life needs space to breath

Ramesh Sood said...

When allowed to flow.. it finds all the space it wants... but will mind ever permit.. that's the gamut.. nicely put Tarang, you made me think with this..

Neha said...

yes, routine worries n tensions make one feel all choked up n suffocated, We really have to take some time off to breathe!! Like the meaning that "space" holds here.

beccagivens said...

Oh this is so true ...

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Gerry: Thanks:)

@ Zongrik: Yes. Thanks:)

@ RS: Thank you:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Neha: Thanks:)

@ Becca: Thanks:)

Morning said...

great space sentiments. wow.

Andy said...

Hello.
I like that..."life needs space to breathe". Isn't that the truth!
Thanks for sharing.

Mine:
Our Candlelight Of Love

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Lovely, and the conciseness of this poem gives the reader space to breathe as well - wonderful!

The Write Girl said...

Amen! So true. Life does require space to breathe. Beautifully written.

meethimirchi said...

Indeed, we all need space now and then

Neinei said...

nice poem, love the pic... :)

Ruchi Jain said...

yaa ,,space to breathe. last line is best.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Nicely said and oh so true.


Melanie

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Morning: Thank you so much!:)

@ Andy: Ya, it's true. Thanks:)

@ Sherry: Thank you! Glad you liked it:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Write girl: Thank you so much!:)

@ Meethimirchi: Yes, you're right. Thanks:)

@ Neinei: Thank you:)

@ Ruchi: Thanks!:)

@ Melanie: Thanks a lot:)

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

remarkable one, well done.

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

Greetings:

how are you today?

great big thanks for your support and attention to poets rally,
hope to see you share any time around the year…

stay blessed, your talent rocks.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

xoxox

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