I want to decorate you
On my lips
Spreading mirth everywhere…
Be my smile.
I want to keep you
In my eyes
Weaving the blissful future…
Be my dreams.
I want to think of you
Always
Forgetting every pain of life
Be my thoughts.
I want to be with you
Till my last breath
Shrugging the meaning of loneliness…
Be my shadow.
I want to hide you
In my heart forever
Keeping my happiness alive
Be my love.
Written for Poetry Jam in Anaphora poem format (An Anaphora is "the repetition of a word or expression several times within a clause or within a paragraph")
Also Shared @ Poets United
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A beautiful and sensitive poem of love!
ReplyDeletenice use of repetition...and def a joy to read...be my smile, be my reason...warm
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ReplyDeleteI doubt u give any reasons for the other person to say no with this one.
I know we're beyond the day for love, Valentine's Day ... however, this is the perfect sentiment for it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and sweet!
ReplyDeleteWow! Tarang...That was deep soulful poem....Loved it a lot :)...
ReplyDeleteI want to be with you
Till my last breath
Shrugging the meaning of loneliness…
Be my shadow.
These lines are my favorite :)
This kind of repetition really fits the flow of love for me, and you catch it well in your poem, the cascading wanting - sweet.
ReplyDeleteAwww... I hope they are, too.
ReplyDeleteLovely use of the prompt.
Upbeat and whimsical... much enjoyed this!
ReplyDelete@ Mary: Thank you!:)
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ReplyDelete@ Valli: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)
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@ Laurie: Thank you!:)
Oh how lovely! A song of love.
ReplyDeleteNicely written. I especially like 'Weaving the blissful future'.
ReplyDeleteGreat for a smile.
ReplyDeleteOooh. I've never heard or read this form but I really like the way you used it. :)
ReplyDeleteSo sweet and romantic ~
ReplyDeleteVery well done ~
@ Sherry: Thanks! Glad you liked it:)
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@ Rachel: I use to write this format quite often but I also didn't know that it's known as Anaphora poem. Thanks for liking it:)
@ Heaven: Thank you so much!:)
beautiful thank you x
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Very nice; melodic and lovely.
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This was absolutely, wonderfully romantic. These are words that a woman would love to hear and would make her feel loved and cherished. Very well written! Be blessed.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful expression............
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