Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Be my smile




I want to decorate you
On my lips
Spreading mirth everywhere…

Be my smile.


I want to keep you
In my eyes
Weaving the blissful future…

Be my dreams.


I want to think of you
Always
Forgetting every pain of life

Be my thoughts.


I want to be with you
Till my last breath
Shrugging the meaning of loneliness…

Be my shadow.


I want to hide you
In my heart forever
Keeping my happiness alive

Be my love.



Written for Poetry Jam in Anaphora poem format (An Anaphora is "the repetition of a word or expression several times within a clause or within a paragraph")

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22 Comments:

Mary said...

A beautiful and sensitive poem of love!

Brian Miller said...

nice use of repetition...and def a joy to read...be my smile, be my reason...warm

Live2cherish said...

:)
I doubt u give any reasons for the other person to say no with this one.

Helen said...

I know we're beyond the day for love, Valentine's Day ... however, this is the perfect sentiment for it.

Mama Zen said...

Beautiful and sweet!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Wow! Tarang...That was deep soulful poem....Loved it a lot :)...

I want to be with you
Till my last breath
Shrugging the meaning of loneliness…

Be my shadow.

These lines are my favorite :)

Victoria said...

This kind of repetition really fits the flow of love for me, and you catch it well in your poem, the cascading wanting - sweet.

Daydreamertoo said...

Awww... I hope they are, too.
Lovely use of the prompt.

Laurie Kolp said...

Upbeat and whimsical... much enjoyed this!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Mary: Thank you!:)

@ Brian: Thanks!:)

@ Live2cherish: :):)Thanks!

@ Helen: Thanks a lot:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Mama Zen: Thank you!:)

@ Valli: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

@ Victoria: Thanks a lot:)

@ Daydreamers: Thank you so much!:)

@ Laurie: Thank you!:)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh how lovely! A song of love.

Renee said...

Nicely written. I especially like 'Weaving the blissful future'.

booguloo said...

Great for a smile.

Rachel Hoyt said...

Oooh. I've never heard or read this form but I really like the way you used it. :)

Heaven said...

So sweet and romantic ~

Very well done ~

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Sherry: Thanks! Glad you liked it:)

@ Renee: Thank you!:)

@ Booguloo: Thanks!:)

@ Rachel: I use to write this format quite often but I also didn't know that it's known as Anaphora poem. Thanks for liking it:)

@ Heaven: Thank you so much!:)

kez said...

beautiful thank you x

zongrik said...

very loving

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charleslmashburn said...

Very nice; melodic and lovely.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/03/14/running-blind/

Elizena said...

This was absolutely, wonderfully romantic. These are words that a woman would love to hear and would make her feel loved and cherished. Very well written! Be blessed.

VaNdAnA ShArMa said...

Beautiful expression............

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