Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Thorns of betrayal






Thorns of betrayal
Spiked the indelible trust
Pure love is tainted


For: Haiku Heights
              Theme Thursday



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34 Comments:

Usha Menon said...

Great lines Tarang. Thoughts of a broken heart. So moving.

Gemma Wiseman said...

Betrayal is definitely the thorn behind the rose of love!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Very well said!:)

KISLAYA GOPAL said...

Very beautifully expressed the pain of betrayal that pricks like thorn.

Me said...

Ouchh.... that was so real!

mindlovemisery said...

Gorgeous and true

readinpleasure said...

Wow! This is beautifully tragic

readinpleasure said...

Wow! beautifully tragic

rallentanda said...

Betrayal is certainly a thorny issue.

Reshma said...

Betrayal is painful and scars love... beautifully crafted Haiku tarang.

Tarang Sinha said...

:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot!

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes, it is...

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Reshma!:)

winspiration.me said...

The betrayal is permsanent while the trust is indelible ~ clever haiku on a tragic theme x

Tejinder kaur said...

Awesome.
Loved this one.
Regards

Richa Singh said...

pure love is tainted... how harsh they sound and yet reveal the truth of today.

wonderful words :)

Richa

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks so much Richa!:)

Judith Westerfield said...

"thorns", "spiked" -- love the wording!!!!

gsb said...

excellent..have never thought of betrayal as the thorn of a rose but it fits.

Lady In Read said...

the pain of betrayal - felt here...

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Judith!!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

:)

Uma Maheswari Anandane said...

Love for Rose and betrayal for thorns -Nicely done!

Tarang Sinha said...

:)Thanks!

Sri Valli said...

Betrayal wounds love! Powerful haiku Tarang!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a ton Valli!:)

Mrsupole said...

Betrayal and loss of trust can surely taint pure love. The sad thing is that it will never be the same after that because once trust is lost it can never be truly regained.

This is a beautiful Haiku that says so much.

Happy Theme Thursday and thank you for this Haiku. Have a wonderful week.

God bless.

Tarang Sinha said...

Very well said Mrsupole! Thank you so much!:)

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