Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Smile never gives up







    Smile never gives up
Even in the marsh of gloom
     Determined to bloom



Written for: The Haiku Challenge
Also Shared@ Haiku My Heart




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28 Comments:

janaki nagaraj said...

Cute.

Ramesh Sood said...

Good one..

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Janaki: Thanks!:)

@ RS: Thank you:)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Haiku...That was rhyming too! Wow...Awesome dear :)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Valli: Ya, it's rhyming...Thank you so much for liking this!:)

Blossom Vydrina said...

marsh of gloom ... nice

Someone is Special said...

Be determined.. Loved your take on the image Tarang...

Grace said...

Nice one...but haiku are not supposed to rhyme dear. Maybe you can change gloom to mud...just a suggestion ~

becca givens said...

It is good to have an uplifting spin on the prompt! :-)

Live2cherish said...

mast :)

and why can a haiku not rhyme????

Amber said...

Nice one! :)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Blossom: Thanks!:)

@ Someone is special: Thank you!:)

@ Grace: I truly welcome your suggestion but I think the word gloom has its own significance in this haiku. I could have used Grief (If rhyming in haiku is strictly against the rule. I don’t know about that.) Thanks for your comment:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Becca: Thanks!:)

@ Live2cherish: Thanks!:) And about rhyming...I have no idea.

@ Amber: Thank you!:)

Kim Mailhot said...

So grateful for determined smiles !

Happy Friday !

Helen Campbell said...

This is fabulous! A smile that never gives up. :)

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

Determined to bloom ~ lovely haiku ~namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) ~ enjoy the weekend ^_^

priti.lisa said...

Love it!
I think it is a very clever pairing,
The photo and the haiku.
I wasn't aware rhyming wasn't allowed.
♥♥♥

Laura said...

beautiful!

Annie said...

Charming, Tarang. And, you go right ahead and break the "rules". It worked.

foxysue said...

And a lesson to us all!

Sue x

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Never giving up must be some sort of divine gift!


Waiting for the Women

Fran aka Redondowriter said...

There's something so poignant about this and yet funny, too. Thanks.

rebecca said...

smile on!

Chèvrefeuille said...

Well done!

Marit said...

This post makes me smile! Have a happy, happy, happy weekend!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Kim: Thank you!:)

@ Helen: Glad you liked it. Thanks!:)

@ Carol: Thank you! Namaste:)

@ Laura: Thanks a lot!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ priti: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)
I also don't know about any such rules.

@ Annie: Thanks for liking it:) I was not aware of breaking any rules:)

@ Foxysue: Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ MMT: Yes, well said. Thanks!:)

@ Fran: Thanks!:)

@ Rebecca: Thank you:)

@ Chèvrefeuille: Thanks a lot!:)

@ Marit: Glad it made you smile:) Thanks!

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