My Translation

Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Smile never gives up







    Smile never gives up
Even in the marsh of gloom
     Determined to bloom



Written for: The Haiku Challenge
Also Shared@ Haiku My Heart



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28 comments:

  1. JANUFebruary 15, 2012 at 5:26 PM

    Cute.

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  2. Ramesh SoodFebruary 15, 2012 at 5:45 PM

    Good one..

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  3. Tarang SinhaFebruary 15, 2012 at 7:00 PM

    @ Janaki: Thanks!:)

    @ RS: Thank you:)

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  4. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺February 15, 2012 at 7:57 PM

    Haiku...That was rhyming too! Wow...Awesome dear :)

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  5. Tarang SinhaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:38 PM

    @ Valli: Ya, it's rhyming...Thank you so much for liking this!:)

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  6. Blossom VydrinaFebruary 15, 2012 at 11:24 PM

    marsh of gloom ... nice

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  7. Someone is SpecialFebruary 16, 2012 at 3:05 AM

    Be determined.. Loved your take on the image Tarang...

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  8. GraceFebruary 16, 2012 at 4:54 AM

    Nice one...but haiku are not supposed to rhyme dear. Maybe you can change gloom to mud...just a suggestion ~

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  9. becca givensFebruary 16, 2012 at 7:26 AM

    It is good to have an uplifting spin on the prompt! :-)

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  10. Live2cherishFebruary 16, 2012 at 12:45 PM

    mast :)

    and why can a haiku not rhyme????

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  11. AmberFebruary 16, 2012 at 2:49 PM

    Nice one! :)

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  12. Tarang SinhaFebruary 16, 2012 at 7:50 PM

    @ Blossom: Thanks!:)

    @ Someone is special: Thank you!:)

    @ Grace: I truly welcome your suggestion but I think the word gloom has its own significance in this haiku. I could have used Grief (If rhyming in haiku is strictly against the rule. I don’t know about that.) Thanks for your comment:)

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  13. Tarang SinhaFebruary 16, 2012 at 7:51 PM

    @ Becca: Thanks!:)

    @ Live2cherish: Thanks!:) And about rhyming...I have no idea.

    @ Amber: Thank you!:)

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  14. Kim MailhotFebruary 17, 2012 at 8:20 PM

    So grateful for determined smiles !

    Happy Friday !

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  15. Helen CampbellFebruary 17, 2012 at 9:36 PM

    This is fabulous! A smile that never gives up. :)

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  16. carol l mckennaFebruary 17, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    Determined to bloom ~ lovely haiku ~namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) ~ enjoy the weekend ^_^

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  17. Priti LisaFebruary 17, 2012 at 11:03 PM

    Love it!
    I think it is a very clever pairing,
    The photo and the haiku.
    I wasn't aware rhyming wasn't allowed.
    ♥♥♥

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  18. LauraFebruary 18, 2012 at 12:05 AM

    beautiful!

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  19. Annie JeffriesFebruary 18, 2012 at 1:19 AM

    Charming, Tarang. And, you go right ahead and break the "rules". It worked.

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  20. foxysueFebruary 18, 2012 at 2:33 AM

    And a lesson to us all!

    Sue x

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  21. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 18, 2012 at 5:05 AM

    Never giving up must be some sort of divine gift!


    Waiting for the Women

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  22. Fran aka RedondowriterFebruary 18, 2012 at 9:55 AM

    There's something so poignant about this and yet funny, too. Thanks.

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  23. rebeccaFebruary 18, 2012 at 9:56 AM

    smile on!

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  24. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 18, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    Well done!

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  25. MaritFebruary 18, 2012 at 1:59 PM

    This post makes me smile! Have a happy, happy, happy weekend!

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  26. Tarang SinhaFebruary 18, 2012 at 3:34 PM

    @ Kim: Thank you!:)

    @ Helen: Glad you liked it. Thanks!:)

    @ Carol: Thank you! Namaste:)

    @ Laura: Thanks a lot!:)

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  27. Tarang SinhaFebruary 18, 2012 at 3:37 PM

    @ priti: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)
    I also don't know about any such rules.

    @ Annie: Thanks for liking it:) I was not aware of breaking any rules:)

    @ Foxysue: Thanks!:)

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  28. Tarang SinhaFebruary 18, 2012 at 4:31 PM

    @ MMT: Yes, well said. Thanks!:)

    @ Fran: Thanks!:)

    @ Rebecca: Thank you:)

    @ Chèvrefeuille: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Marit: Glad it made you smile:) Thanks!

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