Bliss of cherishing
Dreams is so fascinating
Keep dreaming always
Bliss of achieving
Success evokes feeling of
Triumph, keep trying
Bliss of being with your
Dear ones, is such a blessing
Treasure those moments
Written for: The April Heights
All feelings so blissful and the sequence is also so perfect..loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Mohinee!:)
ReplyDeleteall are too good, lucky to read these lines before I sleep today!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Jaideep! I'm glad you felt so:)
ReplyDeleteGood thoughts weaved here..
ReplyDeleteGood thoughts weaved here..
ReplyDeleteThank you Rameshji!:)
ReplyDeleteThese all speak of blissful moments. Would that we all have such moments.
ReplyDeletelovely thoughts haiku ~ so true ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteDREAM , TRY , AND TREASURE ..SO SO ENLIGHTENED .. WELL DONE TARANG,BLISS TO READ THIS HAIKU :) THANKS
ReplyDeleteDREAMING, TRYING, TREASURE .. ITS SO SO ENLIGHTENED.. WELL DONE TARANG .. BLISS TO READ THIS ..THANKS :)
ReplyDeleteGood flow of thoughts and emotions as haiku... loved it..
ReplyDeleteThe best take on Haiku i ve read today on this prompt!!! Amazing... dreams, success and emotions! Well done :)
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Lovely set Tarang! Your haiku can be used in quotation books :D
ReplyDelete@ PattiKen: Thanks!:)
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@ Surbhi: Thank you so much!:)
@ Yellow Tulip: Thank you!:)
@ Pranita: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)
ReplyDelete@ Loredana Donovan: Thank you!:)
@ Valli: :)) Thanks!
Such blissful feelings in every haiku
ReplyDeleteAnd a blissful post. Beautiful words!
ReplyDelete@ Kristjaan Panneman: Thank you!:)
ReplyDelete@ Saru Singhal: Thanks a lot!:)
Bliss comes in different ways to different people.
ReplyDeleteIs This Bliss?