Walking on seashore
Inhaling the fragrance of
Nature, what a treat!
Memories, relished
With every approaching waves
Bring smile, what a treat!
Lying on hammock
With dark chocolates and romance
Novels, what a treat!
Written for: The April Challenge
I can see the seashore in all the three.. well done.. Tarang..
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Rameshji!:)
ReplyDeletePerfectly said, in a nutshell:)
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"what a treat", indeed, Well written haiku. I would like to be there :-)
ReplyDeleteI have beautiful memories of nights spent at the seashore, your post reawakened those... indeed, what a treat! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThere clearly no difficulty in you enjoying life when the simple pleasures are so appreciated.
ReplyDeleteseriously..."what a treat"...awesome set of Haiku... :)
ReplyDeleteYou made me live the sea atmosphere... beautiful!
ReplyDeleteAll are a treat..very nice ~
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeletedelightful energy in your haiku ~ very creative ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteMakes me feel like running away on a vacation to the sea shore right now...beautifully written and well expressed!
ReplyDeleteWhat a treat indeed, especially the last stanza.
ReplyDeleteAwesome haiku Tarang!...Enjoying nature's beauty is my favorite timepass...Thanks for the haiku
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Reading this poem
ReplyDeleteEach line touching the heart
Words, what a treat :)
GBU
Arti
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Well done. Great images you paint here with words. Thank you Tarang.
ReplyDeletePicture perfect!!!
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WOW! That is beautiful!
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Thank you Megha!:)
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