Saturday, June 23, 2012

Support





Declined confidence
Depressed mind and downcast heart
Need moral support

Most precious support
Smiles at you, when everyone
Withdraws approval


A hand of support
A glance full of warmth and trust
Evokes assurance

Written for: Haiku Heights
                      Haiku My Heart



25 comments:

  1. we all need that 'precious support'... I can relate to your emotional haiku

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  2. I loved this one..we really are in need for moral support when we feel low...well written !!!

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  3. Oh I can relate to that needing moral support part a lot! I get it from those smiling hearts when it is needed though! Lovely.

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  4. Reminds me of the hecheya "Each betrayer is also a lantern of hope" -- kiivas mot.x11.7

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  5. Woww!!!!! Wonderful Write Up!!!!

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  6. Lovely lines- I like the way you began with negativity and brought it to positivity.

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  7. @ Joanne: Thanks!:)

    @ Green Speck: Thank you very much!:)

    @ Leo: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Bruce Miller: :)

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  8. @ Creativity: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Pranita: Thank you!:)

    @ Me: Thank you!:)

    @ Jaideep: :) Yes they are!

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  9. No word can define, how beautifully this is written, good job :)

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  10. Visiting from Poetry Pantry: It definitely is hard when support is withdrawn. We all need it; and when it isn't there for us, depression can find us! Well penned.

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  11. @ Dark Angel: Thank you very much!:)

    @ Mary: Very well said. Thank you!:)

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  12. Support is a wonderful blessing.

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  13. Resonate very much with the need for words of support. They make all the difference. Nice to see you posting at the Pantry.

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  14. Unwavering support nurtures our soul and spirit!!
    Reassuring

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  15. dear tarang,
    so glad you arrived.
    rest assured you have a strong hold in haiku my heart.

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  16. @ Grace: :)

    @ Becca: Very well said!:)

    @ Rebecca: Thank you so much! Glad you think so:)

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  17. Support gives us strength and will to carry on..
    lovely lines Tarang..
    enjoyed reading as ever :)

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  18. Yes, you're right. Thank you very much!:)

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  19. That assurance will make them rise again...beautiful one Tarang!

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