Lost …
In the labyrinth of life
Searching for a dream
That may give a theme
Gaining conscience
To understand
The gist of life
Meeting opportunities
That life gifts
Seeking courage
To tackle fear, failure, grieves and hurdles
And exploring
Happiness and peace
Looking for reasons to smile
Savoring the blessing of
Togetherness
Recognizing
The love of life
That may stretch
A rainbow
Learning the value of time
Developing determination
To succeed
And finally
Finding the correct path
And emerging from the labyrinth
As a winner
My Entry for: Poets United Think Tank
You explore the idea that being lost in a labyrinth may also mean being found! Interesting thoughts!
ReplyDeleteHello Tarang!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping at my blog and leaving a comment. :)
This is such a lovely and inspiring poem, the labyrinth symbol is so appropriate. :)
@ Gemma Wiseman: Thank you! If we consider our lives a labyrinth, we all seek above mentioned things in it.
ReplyDelete@ Swarnali: :) Thank you so much!:)
Wow!...This poem clearly explains the purpose of life....Lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteTarang,
ReplyDeleteA very realistic look at life via the labyrinth...Going through tests and stresses, to eventually find happiness and success...
Eileen
I love the philosophy of this poem! It is not easy to find the correct path sometime, is it? Sometimes I think I am on it, and then again I think I am not.
ReplyDelete@ Valli: Thanks a lot!:)
ReplyDelete@ Eileen: Glad you liked it. Thanks and best wishes:)
@ Mary: Yes, sometimes it's not easy. Glad you liked it. Thank you so much!:)
I loved the meaning your poem tries to convey, the objective of our existence, the purpose of our actions and deeds...nicely written.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful is all that I can say- this is one of the most beautiful posts I have come across by you Tarang.Simply put across such wonderful message - loved it!!
ReplyDeleteHi Tarang,
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful lines..:-) Thanks a lot for your visit and comment..:-)Glad to have met you here..:-)
@ Green Speck: Glad you liked it. Thank you!:)
ReplyDelete@ Me: Thank you so much Me! I'm so happy you think so!:)
@ A Homemaker's Utopia: Hi! Same here. Thanks a lot!:)
So much wisdom in your words!! Great job on this!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Hannah!:)
ReplyDeleteStretching the value of time and rainbows...wow! This was so visually stunning~ I loved it! :D
ReplyDeleteThank you Ella! I'm so glad you loved it:)
ReplyDeletewow powerful words that brought wonderful imaginary
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Becca! Glad you liked it:)
ReplyDeleteThis was one of the most meaningful poems that I've read in a while :)
ReplyDeleteBeing lost and finding the path and emerging as a winner...Wow! That's worth living out!!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem!!!
@ Neha: I'm so glad you think so. Thank you very much!:)
ReplyDelete@ Diana: Thank you so much!:)
I like the idea that life is a labyrinth to negotiate. It is sometimes even fun to be lost in one as we struggle to find answers to our own problems. Great post.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!:)
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