Thursday, July 5, 2012

Balm of forgiveness





Balm of forgiveness
Heals an aching heart that feels
Genuinely sorry



Written for: Poetry Jam




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20 Comments:

Green Speck said...

It's always good to forgive !!!

Mary said...

Aptly stated! Very true.

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Green Speck: :)

@ Mary: Thank you!:)

The Unknowngnome said...

A very soothing haiku.

kolembo said...

Very nice! It plays here...the heart is already sorry, so forgiveness can find it's way...and make giver and reciever, better.

Very nice.

Vållῐ ★☆ said...

Touching one....Nicely penned :)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

You've said it all, so succinctly. Well done.

Helen said...

You used the word 'balm' perfectly.

Me said...

Beautifully expressed - forgiveness is truly divine

Laurie Kolp said...

I like forgiveness as a balm.

Brian Miller said...

the genuine part is def the key....for it does heal the heart...

Saru Singhal said...

One of the best Haiku I have ever read. Brilliant!

Loredana Donovan said...

Yes, forgiveness is healing ... I like the balm metaphor

Mary Mansfield said...

A beautiful haiku!

turtlememoir said...

that's true! - nice haiku

Peggy said...

So much said in so few words. Excellent! I love these short form pieces that say a lot.

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Unknowngnome: Thank you!:)

@ Kolembo: Well said. Thanks!:)

@ Valli: Thanks!:)

@ Sherry: Thank you!:)

@ Helen: Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Me: Yes it is. Thank you!:)

@ Laurie Kolp: Thanks!:)

@ Brian Miller: :)

@ Saru: Thank you so much! Glad you think so:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Loredana: Thank you!:)

@ Mary: Thanks!:)

@ Turtlemamoir: Thanks!:)

@ Peggy: Yes, it's interesting. Glad you liked it. Thank you!:)

Margaret said...

genuinely sorry is the key ingredient here.

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