Monday, July 9, 2012

Showers of rain







Freshness adorned the
Nature, as showers of rain
Sprinkled its blessing

Nature smiled with new
Charm, life proceeded with new
Vigor and prospect 


Written for: The Mag
Poets United
Tackle it Tuesday



26 comments:

  1. VEry beautiful...The power of rain!! :)

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  2. @ Mama Zen: Thank you!:)

    @ Valli: Yes...refreshing! Thank you!:)

    @ Janaki: Thanks!:)

    @ Green Speck: Thanks!:)

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  3. Lovely haiku, well using the picture. By the way the picture which goes with this haiku is beautiful.

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  4. I can almost feel the gentle shower mizzle down. Beautiful haiku.

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  5. delightful nature haiku ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  6. Rains...an eternal inspiration for every writer.

    Beautifully written Tarang. I wish I could do Haiku :)

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  7. Delightful take..loved it.. do visit here Tarang..it feels nice to hear from you..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/07/natures-ornaments.html

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  8. @ Sue: Thank you!:)

    @ Kristjaan Panneman: Thank you very much!:)

    @ K McGee: :) Thank you!

    @ Carol: Thanks!:)

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  9. @ Me: Yes. Thank you so much! And you can write haiku. Just try once:)

    @ Neha: Thank you!:)

    @ Rameshji: Thank you very much!:)

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  10. Very sweet poem, i bet he was cranky it rained on bis hay, though !

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  11. love the line 'vigor and prospect'.....delightful picture...however, I have one question: How can you link up with Tackle it Tuesday without following the prompt?

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  12. I really like this...great interpretation of this painting.

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  13. @ Kutamun: :) Thank you!

    @ Joanne: Glad you liked it. Thank you!

    Actually I'm participating for one more picture prompt, so I decided to keep just one picture. I hope Tackle it Tuesday doesn't mind :)

    @ Poet Laundry: Thank you so much!:)

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  14. I love the pairing of vigor and prospect...very nice...

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  15. Nice to read you, I greet you from Argentina. Elen

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  16. This lovely poem makes me thirsty for cooling natural water suddenly. Visiting today from Poetry Pantry.
    My piece there is from a year ago and is a "second chance" haiku titled "Arthur's Seat"

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  17. Two lovely haiku!

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  18. Love the positive and optimistic feel of your poem!

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  19. I like the positive and optimistic tone of this poem!

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  20. I like sprinkled its blessing!! I am late in visiting from Tackle it Tuesday! Breakfast with a View

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  21. Last stanza I loved... the positivity it carries is viral!

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