Sunday, July 15, 2012

First Cry







World rejoiced at her
 Arrival, battle of life
Begins with first cry

Written for: Haiku Heights
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20 Comments:

Swarnali said...

You have so beautifully and successfully summed up the miracle called birth in just 12 words!! Great composition, Tarang :)

Green Speck said...

So True ... nice take on the prompt !!!

Me said...

Superb Haiku.... I loved this one!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Swarnali: Thank you so much!:)

@ Green Speck: Thank you!:)

@ Me: Thanks a lot!:)

Mirage said...

One of the most beautiful haiku poems. Well done! :-)

And the baby in the picture is SO cute. ^_^

Gemma Wiseman said...

The Scream (painting reference) begins with the first cry! Beautiful haiku!

Andy David said...

Dear friend,
Great post...reminds us all about the beauty of life.

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

Wonderful haiku and so true ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Mirage: Thank you very much!:)

@ Gemma Wiseman: :) Thank you!:)

@ Andy David: Thank you!:)

@ Carol: Thanks a lot!:)

Vållῐ ★☆ said...

Battle of life begins with first cry....Very beautiful lines Tarang :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Valli!:)

Poet Laundry said...

good haiku...I especially like:

battle of life
Begins with first cry

...nicely done!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you poet laundry! Glad you liked it:)

Jaideep said...

Such a beautiful work,. lovely

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you very much Jaideep!:)

kolembo said...

super, absolutely, enjoyed the breath inbetween.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot Kolembo!:)

Jaskirancanvas said...

Hi! Added you as Liebster Blog Award recipient.

The Link:http://jaskirancanvas.blogspot.in/2012/07/on-receiving-liebster-blog-award.html

Keep Creating! :)

Vållῐ ★☆ said...

Your writing prompts list on the sidebar was very helpful...I explored to those new places...Thanks to you :)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Jaskiran: Thank you so much!:)

@ Valli: Yes, they are helpful!:)

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