Sunday, January 20, 2013

The veil of dusk






The veil of dusk falls
Night sleeps in arms of twinkling
Stars, bright dawn awaits...



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27 Comments:

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Lovely and gentle.

Dave King said...

Image and haiku compliment each other well and both are enjoyable individually.

Rhythm said...

bright dawn awaits.. to bring a new day, new opportunities, new experiences and new happiness :)

beautifully written Tarang :)

Chhavi Vatwani said...

I have somehow always loved the idea of dusk setting down as a veil.. :) as if covering a face, so when the veil is lifted (dawn arrives), a beautiful bright face appears! :)

anthonynorth said...

Perfect words for dusk.

Kim Nelson said...

I adore a well-constructed haiku. I adore this.

Kim Nelson said...

I adore a well-constructed haiku. I adore this.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Beautiful words and oh, what a MAGNIFICENT sky!!!!!!!!!!

Judith Westerfield said...

"Night sleeping" That's a grrrrrrrrreat way of describing it.

Lady In Read said...

the veil of dusk.. something i would love..

Tarang Sinha said...

@ J Cosmo: Thanks!:)

@ Dave King: Thanks so much!:)

@ Rhythm: Well said! Thank you!:)

@ Chhavi: Beautiful idea! Isn't it?

@ Anthonynorth: Thanks a lot!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Kim: Thank you!:)

@ Sherry Blue Sky: Thanks so much!!:)

@ Judith: Thank you soooo much!!:)

@ Lady in Red: Thanks!:)

Vaishali Jain said...

Tarang, this haiku has a touch of truth and hope. Nicely written! Looking forward to more. :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Vaishali!:)

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

A very happy and optimistic haiku!

well done!!

Perpetual Dusk

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Meenakshi!:)

Green Speck said...

A bright dawn is always round the corner :-)

wabisabipoet said...

I just love the night sleeping in the arms of the twinkling stars!!

Me said...

I love your haikus a lot Tarang, they are much more than just words!

rudraprayaga said...

Apt for night and dusk.

ashivani said...

Wonderful arrangement of words and scenes.. lovely..

eof777 said...

Beautiful... and the picture is spectacular.
:-)
Eliz

Sanjana Pareek said...

beautiful imagery!

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Tarang Sinha said...

@ Green Speck: :)

@ Wabisabipoet: Thank you!:)

@ Me: Thank you so much! Glad you like it...:)

@ Rudraprayaga: Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Ashivani: Thanks a lot!:)

@ Eliz: Thanks so much!:)

@ Sanjana: Thank you!:)

heavenhappens said...

A beautiful haiku x

Gayu said...

Hmmm....lovely! these lines bring in a feeling of Hope...to await for something best to happen!

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