Monday, August 12, 2013

Different path






She tapped her skillful steps on the floor, swaying the frills in style, and envisaged looks of admiration and encouragement. She finished her dance and expected a big round of applause but met with oblivious audience, dirty looks and an aura suffused with smoke and stench of alcohol. Oh, fate led her to a different path. 



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18 Comments:

Vandana Sharma said...

A pity that she has to show her talent at such a palce, but she must have had some reaso nto choose it.

Helen said...

This feels like the beginning of an entertaining short story .... more please.

Tarang Sinha said...

Of course there's always some reasons when you (Have to) choose thing differently...

Tarang Sinha said...

:) Thank you Helen!:)

Me said...

Wow... this was really very well written... and just like Helen said I would want to read more of it!!

Tess Kincaid said...

Well done...very evocative...

Tarang Sinha said...

:)
Thank you so much Me!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot Tess! Glad you liked it :)

Uma Maheswari Anandane said...

I second Helen's comment here. The twist at the end makes me want more of the story

Saru Singhal said...

But she performs with high standards and does justice to her art. Well written.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks Uma! I think now I should start planning this story ahead...:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes. Thank you Saru!:)

Doctor FTSE said...

I agree with Helen. Your post could be extended into a longer story.

Reshma said...

Life is not always how we wish it were...Poor lady!!

Jerry E Beuterbaugh said...

I sure hope she finds her way!

Kutamun said...

Not every story has a happy ending ! Thankfully

Annie said...

Our dreams are often left dark and dashed.

Helena said...

But she must keep on dancing - even if it's just all in the mind! Enjoyed this Mag!

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