Lying lifelessly
In the pool of blood, they hurt
Many hearts...to bleed
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Yes, pain all around in that scenario. Very sad.
ReplyDeleteYes, it's sad:(
DeleteAwesome...great post.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!:)
Deleteyes bleeding heart in the aftermath........nicely done
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana!:)
DeleteReally sad :/
ReplyDeleteSo much pain!
ReplyDeleteYes, and they don't realize how much pain they cause to their dear ones...
Delete"many hearts...to bleed"
ReplyDeletenever a good reason to
slaughter innocents
Nice!
DeleteThe path of pain that causes more pain, very nicely worded Tarang.
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma!
DeleteOur pains and sorrows seem enormous and un-ending and just too complex to be sorted out. But when viewed from the lens of others, they shrink down to their normal, endurable size and we realize that we can, in fact, conquer them and move on.
ReplyDeleteThis is definitely sad, more so because the person is inflicting additional pain on her/his self, probably in order to highlight or overshadow the main problem.
(uh, sorry for such a gigantic ranting comment. great haiku. :) )
Very well said!
DeleteAnd I like long comments!:)
being hurt is the most common feeling..
ReplyDeleteno one can escape it..
True!
DeletePoignantly expressed in words and images
ReplyDeleteThank you Judith!
DeleteThe heart pumps blood says science but heart bleeds says the poignant lover. Pain written all over.
ReplyDeleteOh, nice quote!
DeleteThanks!
Awful act in awesome words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Prayaga!
DeleteWhat a moving write this is, Tarang!
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