My Translation

Thursday, December 16, 2010

You…

          
                 That was a prized moment…
                 when I welcomed you in my life.
                 You made me understand…
                 the essence of happiness.
                 Your touch is like velvet.
                 Your eyes so mesmerizing.
                 Your voice is so melodic.
                 Your breath is like whisper of love.
                 Your smile is divine.
                 Your hug is like heaven.
                 You’re my best companion.
                 You made me feel complete.
                 You’re precious to me… my son.



                 Image Prompt@: Magpie Tales                  
                 Also submitted to: Promising Poets Parking Lot

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37 comments:

  1. BerowneDecember 16, 2010 at 5:18 PM

    Moving...

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 16, 2010 at 5:43 PM

    a mother's love is evidently demonstrated here.
    well done magpie.

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  3. Tess KincaidDecember 16, 2010 at 9:31 PM

    Lovely tribute to maternal love.

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  4. Other MaryDecember 16, 2010 at 10:27 PM

    Any mother can relate...nice take.

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  5. HelenDecember 16, 2010 at 11:06 PM

    This is beautiful ... Happy Holidays!

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  6. R. Burnett BakerDecember 17, 2010 at 7:29 AM

    A perfect description of how my own mother has made me feel throughout my life. Excellent write!

    Rick

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  7. Tarang SinhaDecember 17, 2010 at 7:01 PM

    Thanks,everyone.

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  8. Carrie Van HornDecember 20, 2010 at 9:28 PM

    Tarang this is beautiful...a mother's love is always full of strength and beauty! :-)

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  9. K McGeeApril 20, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    If my boy weren't in school I'd rush to give him a hug after reading this. How true these words ring. Beautiful tribute.

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  10. bttrflyscarApril 20, 2011 at 10:38 PM

    gorgeous writing here

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  11. Vinay Leo R.April 20, 2011 at 10:40 PM

    This was an image I couldn't get my thoughts on that time for Magpie :) I loved the take on this, and you write it with such emotion! Admire it, Tarang!

    My Post Is Here

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  12. UnknownApril 21, 2011 at 3:38 AM

    Absolutely wonderful. Those of us blessed with sons will all relate with heart and mind.

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  13. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryApril 21, 2011 at 7:30 AM

    stunning expressions.
    well done,

    welcome to poets rally.

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  14. Tarang SinhaApril 21, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    I truly thank you all for stopping by and posting such nice & valuable comments:)

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  15. Tarang SinhaApril 21, 2011 at 8:40 AM

    @Vinay: (Generally & initially) I can’t get my thoughts on any given prompt :) Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it.

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  16. bendedspoonApril 21, 2011 at 11:36 AM

    so sweet and beautiful :)

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  17. Butterflies of timeApril 21, 2011 at 1:28 PM

    Lovely !Warm and heartfelt-just like a mother's love!

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  18. AnonymousApril 21, 2011 at 2:24 PM

    this is just beautiful Tarang...

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  19. Tarang SinhaApril 21, 2011 at 8:29 PM

    Thank you so much bendedspoon, Butterflies of time & Sam.:)

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  20. AnonymousApril 21, 2011 at 10:17 PM

    So very sweet. I know how you feel--I feel the same about my two daughters--being their mother.

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  21. AnonymousApril 22, 2011 at 1:41 AM

    This is quite the same feeling I have about my daughter. She is my twin soul. Touching write.

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  22. AnonymousApril 22, 2011 at 7:55 AM

    o yes they sure transform all that we are :)
    enjoy the rally!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/22/on-peace-and-wisdom-haiku-poem-ing-on/

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  23. PaulamiApril 22, 2011 at 10:19 AM

    thats a really beautiful rendition :)

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  24. AnonymousApril 22, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    nice one.. my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/

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  25. AnonymousApril 23, 2011 at 1:00 AM

    I know exactly how you feel. Well expressed.
    Matthew

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  26. Tarang SinhaApril 23, 2011 at 8:00 AM

    I truly thank you all for your nice comments!:) I'm glad you all liked it.

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  27. VictoriaApril 23, 2011 at 12:07 PM

    Refreshing to read about a mother's love. It feels much the same with daughters and doesn't change when they are grown.

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  28. Jack Edwards PoetryApril 23, 2011 at 11:34 PM

    Brilliant repetition of 'Your'

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  29. LiApril 24, 2011 at 2:04 AM

    Perfect for Mother's Day, your emotion really comes through.

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  30. Tarang SinhaApril 24, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    Thank you so much Victoria, Jack & Li!

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  31. PurviApril 27, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    Simple, beautiful, genuine !
    I am Purvi ~
    http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/04/22/music-to-the-soul/

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  32. Tarang SinhaApril 27, 2011 at 6:06 PM

    Thank you so much Purvi for stopping by and posting such a nice comment.

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  33. AnonymousApril 29, 2011 at 1:44 AM

    Lovely. Velvet touch is bliss.

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  34. Anarchist Girl ScoutApril 29, 2011 at 6:33 AM

    It's funny how such small people can have such a big impact. I don't have any children of my own, but I love working with my Girl Scouts!

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  35. Tarang SinhaApril 29, 2011 at 11:41 AM

    Yes it is! Thanks Deep.

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  36. Tarang SinhaApril 29, 2011 at 11:46 AM

    Hi, Anarchist Girl Scout. Thanks for stopping by. Being with children is such an enjoyment.

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  37. SpreeApril 29, 2011 at 9:40 PM

    it is amazing :)

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