Thursday, December 16, 2010

You…

          
                 That was a prized moment…
                 when I welcomed you in my life.
                 You made me understand…
                 the essence of happiness.
                 Your touch is like velvet.
                 Your eyes so mesmerizing.
                 Your voice is so melodic.

                 Your breath is like whisper of love.
                 Your smile is divine.
                 Your hug is like heaven.
                 You’re my best companion.
                 You made me feel complete.
                 You’re precious to me… my son.



                 Image Prompt@: Magpie Tales 
                 

                 Also submitted to: Promising Poets Parking Lot


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37 Comments:

Berowne said...

Moving...

Jingle said...

a mother's love is evidently demonstrated here.
well done magpie.

Tess Kincaid said...

Lovely tribute to maternal love.

Mary said...

Any mother can relate...nice take.

Helen said...

This is beautiful ... Happy Holidays!

R. Burnett Baker said...

A perfect description of how my own mother has made me feel throughout my life. Excellent write!

Rick

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks,everyone.

Carrie Burtt said...

Tarang this is beautiful...a mother's love is always full of strength and beauty! :-)

K McGee said...

If my boy weren't in school I'd rush to give him a hug after reading this. How true these words ring. Beautiful tribute.

bttrflyscar said...

gorgeous writing here

Vinay said...

This was an image I couldn't get my thoughts on that time for Magpie :) I loved the take on this, and you write it with such emotion! Admire it, Tarang!

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Kim Nelson said...

Absolutely wonderful. Those of us blessed with sons will all relate with heart and mind.

Morning said...

stunning expressions.
well done,

welcome to poets rally.

Tarang said...

I truly thank you all for stopping by and posting such nice & valuable comments:)

Tarang said...

@Vinay: (Generally & initially) I can’t get my thoughts on any given prompt :) Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it.

bendedspoon said...

so sweet and beautiful :)

Butterflies of time said...

Lovely !Warm and heartfelt-just like a mother's love!

sam said...

this is just beautiful Tarang...

Tarang said...

Thank you so much bendedspoon, Butterflies of time & Sam.:)

bodhirose said...

So very sweet. I know how you feel--I feel the same about my two daughters--being their mother.

honeyhaiku said...

This is quite the same feeling I have about my daughter. She is my twin soul. Touching write.

lynnaima said...

o yes they sure transform all that we are :)
enjoy the rally!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/22/on-peace-and-wisdom-haiku-poem-ing-on/

Paulami said...

thats a really beautiful rendition :)

fiveloaf said...

nice one.. my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/

poetry-diary.com said...

I know exactly how you feel. Well expressed.
Matthew

Tarang said...

I truly thank you all for your nice comments!:) I'm glad you all liked it.

Victoria said...

Refreshing to read about a mother's love. It feels much the same with daughters and doesn't change when they are grown.

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Brilliant repetition of 'Your'

li said...

Perfect for Mother's Day, your emotion really comes through.

Tarang said...

Thank you so much Victoria, Jack & Li!

Purvi said...

Simple, beautiful, genuine !
I am Purvi ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/04/22/music-to-the-soul/

Tarang said...

Thank you so much Purvi for stopping by and posting such a nice comment.

deep said...

Lovely. Velvet touch is bliss.

Anarchist Girl Scout said...

It's funny how such small people can have such a big impact. I don't have any children of my own, but I love working with my Girl Scouts!

Tarang said...

Yes it is! Thanks Deep.

Tarang said...

Hi, Anarchist Girl Scout. Thanks for stopping by. Being with children is such an enjoyment.

Ananya said...

it is amazing :)

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