My Translation

Sunday, June 12, 2011

Triumph!


Despite all the fight
Sometimes, Slavery of fate
Is unavoidable

Opportunity
Is slipping through my fingers
The future seems bleak

But…

My next step will be
One more endeavor for sure
Triumph can’t escape.


Submitted to: Haiku Heights
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21 comments:

  1. Jae RoseJune 12, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    'slavery of fate' is such a powerful line..it always worth trying to step on..Jae Rose

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  2. AnonymousJune 12, 2011 at 3:33 PM

    Powerful message and I love the sense of triumph at the end!

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  3. Tarang SinhaJune 12, 2011 at 3:49 PM

    Thank you so much Jae & Mindlovemisery! I'm glad you liked it.

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  4. World So WideJune 12, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    Lovely how you tie together fate, opportunity and triumph :)

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  5. DefiantJune 12, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    Aw...so true tarang sinha :)

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  6. Understanding AliceJune 12, 2011 at 8:02 PM

    I liked this very much, especially triumph not escaping - you have lightened my day :)

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  7. Tarang SinhaJune 12, 2011 at 8:32 PM

    Thank you so much Leonard & Madhumati!

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  8. Tarang SinhaJune 12, 2011 at 8:32 PM

    Thanks a lot Alice! I'm glad my poem could do so.

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  9. WhitesnakeJune 13, 2011 at 2:04 AM

    I like positive people!

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  10. JingleJune 13, 2011 at 2:40 AM

    smart Haikus.
    good luck.
    live for the day.

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  11. AnonymousJune 13, 2011 at 7:18 AM

    Nicely done!

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  12. Tarang SinhaJune 13, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    Thank you so much Whitesnake, Jingle & Beccagivens!

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  13. AltonianJune 13, 2011 at 8:28 PM

    Well said - you must keep trying, or all is lost.

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  14. PremaJune 13, 2011 at 10:12 PM

    'slavery of fate'...powerful lines...there is always the conflict in the rational oriental mind...between free will/choice and destiny/fate...which is nothing but a kind of slavery! well done!

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  15. ArielJune 14, 2011 at 2:59 AM

    Try, try and try always. Never give up. that should be the mantra right?

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  16. Kodjo DeynooJune 14, 2011 at 11:22 AM

    Great job mixing all three prompt up to end up with a positive light

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  17. Tarang SinhaJune 14, 2011 at 12:39 PM

    @pr910: Thanka a lot.

    @Ariel: Exactly. Thanks.

    @Kodjo Deyno: Thank you so much.

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  18. Andy McDonaldJune 15, 2011 at 7:05 AM

    True words spoken from a wise mind. You have used these prompts like a true wordsmith.

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  19. Tarang SinhaJune 15, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    Thank you so much Andy!

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  20. gsb3June 17, 2011 at 11:42 PM

    Yes, opportunity, or "perceived" opportunity does seem to elude us all sometimes, especially as we age. Nice one.

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  21. Mike PatrickJune 19, 2011 at 4:17 AM

    A great trio. Very profound.

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