Sunday, June 12, 2011

Triumph!


Despite all the fight
Sometimes, Slavery of fate
Is unavoidable

Opportunity
Is slipping through my fingers
The future seems bleak

But…

My next step will be
One more endeavor for sure
Triumph can’t escape.


Submitted to: Haiku Heights
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21 Comments:

jaerose said...

'slavery of fate' is such a powerful line..it always worth trying to step on..Jae Rose

mindlovemisery said...

Powerful message and I love the sense of triumph at the end!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Jae & Mindlovemisery! I'm glad you liked it.

Leonard Blumfeld said...

Lovely how you tie together fate, opportunity and triumph :)

... Madhumathi ... said...

Aw...so true tarang sinha :)

Understanding Alice said...

I liked this very much, especially triumph not escaping - you have lightened my day :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Leonard & Madhumati!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot Alice! I'm glad my poem could do so.

Whitesnake said...

I like positive people!

Jingle said...

smart Haikus.
good luck.
live for the day.

beccagivens said...

Nicely done!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Whitesnake, Jingle & Beccagivens!

Old Altonian said...

Well said - you must keep trying, or all is lost.

pr910 said...

'slavery of fate'...powerful lines...there is always the conflict in the rational oriental mind...between free will/choice and destiny/fate...which is nothing but a kind of slavery! well done!

Ariel said...

Try, try and try always. Never give up. that should be the mantra right?

Kodjo Deynoo. said...

Great job mixing all three prompt up to end up with a positive light

Tarang Sinha said...

@pr910: Thanka a lot.

@Ariel: Exactly. Thanks.

@Kodjo Deyno: Thank you so much.

Andy McDonald said...

True words spoken from a wise mind. You have used these prompts like a true wordsmith.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Andy!

gsb3 said...

Yes, opportunity, or "perceived" opportunity does seem to elude us all sometimes, especially as we age. Nice one.

Mike Patrick said...

A great trio. Very profound.

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