My Translation

Monday, September 5, 2011

Jealousy









Friendship flourishes
With affection, care and trust
No place for jealousy

Weeds of jealousy
Embitter tender feeling
Friend becomes stranger




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19 comments:

  1. Gemma WisemanSeptember 5, 2011 at 3:49 AM

    Powerful thoughts on the insidious evil of jealousy!

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  2. Geraldine September 5, 2011 at 4:53 AM

    How easily this can happen. It pays to be honest and upfront with friends. Nice work!

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  3. GraceSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:13 AM

    So true...nice haiku set contrasting friend and stranger..

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  4. andy sewinaSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:32 AM

    I like the way you associate jealousy with weeds!

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  5. knot2shareSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:37 AM

    This is good...especially the second one. How unfortunate isn't it?

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  6. SarasSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:59 AM

    Very well said!

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  7. Susie ClevengerSeptember 5, 2011 at 10:28 AM

    True words...like your words on how to keep a friend and how to lose one

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    Two great haiku.
    Just shows what a malignant weed jealousy can be.

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:19 PM

    Very interesting points. Thanks!

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  10. NankaSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    So very true what you say here and you have very well combined the two prompts!! They blend so easily!!

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  11. Tarang SinhaSeptember 5, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    @ Gemma: Thanks!

    @ Geraldine: Thanks a lot.:)

    @ Grace: Thank you so much!:)

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  12. Vinay Leo R.September 5, 2011 at 8:27 PM

    So true.. those unnecessary weeds. Friendship could definitely do without it! :)

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  13. Tarang SinhaSeptember 5, 2011 at 8:36 PM

    @ Andy: Thanks!:)

    @ Knot2share: Yes it is. Thank you:)

    @ Saras: Thanks!:)

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  14. Tarang SinhaSeptember 5, 2011 at 8:38 PM

    @ Mama Zen: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Susie: Thanks!:)

    @ mjshorts: Thanka a lot:)

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  15. Tarang SinhaSeptember 5, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    @ Anonymous: Thanks.

    @ Thank you so much. Glad you liked it!:)

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  16. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 6, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    May all our friendships flourish, just as you describe!

    Things That Flourish Here and Here and Here

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  17. TweetySeptember 6, 2011 at 10:56 AM

    Sigh....A crude reality...You put it in simple yet very effective words....May such weeds never develop in any relation...

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  18. CherylSeptember 6, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    Beautifully written sad truth.

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  19. PremISeptember 9, 2011 at 2:58 PM

    Nice interpretation of Weed!

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