Monday, September 5, 2011

Jealousy









Friendship flourishes
With affection, care and trust
No place for jealousy

Weeds of jealousy
Embitter tender feeling
Friend becomes stranger










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20 Comments:

Gemma Wiseman said...

Powerful thoughts on the insidious evil of jealousy!

Geraldine said...

How easily this can happen. It pays to be honest and upfront with friends. Nice work!

Grace said...

So true...nice haiku set contrasting friend and stranger..

andy sewina said...

I like the way you associate jealousy with weeds!

knot2share said...

This is good...especially the second one. How unfortunate isn't it?

Saras said...

Very well said!

Mama Zen said...

Excellent!

Susie Clevenger said...

True words...like your words on how to keep a friend and how to lose one

mjshorts said...

Two great haiku.
Just shows what a malignant weed jealousy can be.

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Nanka said...

So very true what you say here and you have very well combined the two prompts!! They blend so easily!!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Gemma: Thanks!

@ Geraldine: Thanks a lot.:)

@ Grace: Thank you so much!:)

Leo said...

So true.. those unnecessary weeds. Friendship could definitely do without it! :)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Andy: Thanks!:)

@ Knot2share: Yes it is. Thank you:)

@ Saras: Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Mama Zen: Thank you so much!:)

@ Susie: Thanks!:)

@ mjshorts: Thanka a lot:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Anonymous: Thanks.

@ Thank you so much. Glad you liked it!:)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

May all our friendships flourish, just as you describe!

Things That Flourish Here and Here and Here

Tweety said...

Sigh....A crude reality...You put it in simple yet very effective words....May such weeds never develop in any relation...

Cheryl said...

Beautifully written sad truth.

PremI said...

Nice interpretation of Weed!

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