Thursday, September 1, 2011

Ink of joy







Failure drags the zest
Mumbles the lost hope and strength
Peace of life shattered

But,

Penetrate the fog
Of dismay, and fill the life
With flying colors

So,

Shrug off the sadness
Write the chapters of your life
With the ink of joy



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23 Comments:

Rek said...

Inspiring words and I loved how u seamlessly strung the words of two different prompts together.

Leo said...

This is beautiful.. an inspiring ending for the combination! Loved it!

poetry-diary.com said...

The last three lines are a great haiku on their own. I like these especially.

oldegg said...

Can't argue with that ink of joy! It is quite a drug.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

"ink of joy"

I love that line!

Day 1: Write

Tarang Sinha said...

My heartfelt thanks to all of you!:)

mjshorts said...

I enjoyed the last three lines as a stand alone haiku.
Great read.

iblogmoore (Amanda Moore) said...

that last Haiku is my new mantra, splendid writing!

Andy Sewina said...

Phew, I love the line 'ink of joy'!!!

Traci B said...

Wonderful way to combine prompts! I love the whole thing, especially the progression to the "ink of joy" at the end. :)

beccagivens said...

Love "ink of joy!!"

Sheilagh Lee said...

lovely

Bluebell Books said...

awesome Haikus.

Bluebell Books said...

You write fabulous poetry/stories,

Please check out short story slam week 9 today.

Hope to see you around.

Best!
xoxox

Ramesh Sood said...

Beautiful Tarang, please keep writing such delight..

Rosie said...

I LOVE the idea of colours flying...just brilliant!!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Ink of joy, come fill my pen!

Spadoman said...

Very nice. Sound advice. Writing can and does set us free. Love it!

Peace

tami said...

love the 'ink of joy'!

Meri said...

The third haiku is my favorite.

Susie Clevenger said...

Such beautiful life lessons in your words...great job!

jaerose said...

'ink of joy'..perfect..Jae

oldegg said...

Well you certainly find a lot of ink of joy here and amongst your fellow writers.

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