Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Move on!








Move on!

Opportunities are waiting for you.
So what, if this chance
Slipped from your hand
New horizons are standing
With open arms.


Move on!

Happiness is waiting for you
So what if grief
Knocked your heart
New joy is ready
To embrace you

Move on!

Amity is waiting for you
So what, if you
Couldn’t bond with someone
New camaraderie is
Extending hands for you

Move on!

Creativity is waiting for you
So what, if you
Lost your muse for once
New vision is
Taking shape for you.

Move on!

Life is waiting for you
So what if, darkness
Is suffused all over
New dawn is
About to rise very soon.


 Submitted to: Magpie Tales
                            Short Story Slam
                           Poetry Picnic 
                           One Single Impression


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25 Comments:

R. Burnett Baker said...

Refreshing to read a positive, uplifting take on the photo!

Rick

Morning said...

love the uplifting attitude.
well done.

Morning said...

love the uplifting attitude.
well done.

Jyoti Mishra said...

Move on is a magic word..
u have depicted it beautifully

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Rick & Morning: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)

@ Jyoti: Yes it is. Thanks a lot:)

saurabh modi said...

you know....the whole poem is amazing..
but the ending takes away the cake.
big time.big ,big time.!

Life said...

THIS IS FILLED WITH POSITIVENESS....:
REALLY NICE

FROM,
LIFE
MY ENTRY FOR THE SHORT STORY SLAM BOOK IS
http://blindfold-princess.blogspot.com/2011/08/awaiting.html?spref=bl

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Saurabh: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

@ Life: Thank you!:)

charleslmashburn said...

A wonderful poem, and I totally agree with the message!

Here is my week 9 offering: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/

Kay said...

Beautiful choice of words and wonderful perspective regarding the photo! Thank you :)

http://kaysalady.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/at-half-past-four/

The Cello Strings said...

you have written it wholeheartedly,

thanks for sharing.

Santosh Kumar said...

Very inspiring! Keep it up. Move on..

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely positive words.

Anna :o]

Ann LeFlore said...

Such an love poem and the words are so positive and really inspire.

http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/05/the-milky-seas/

e.a.s. demers said...

such inspiring affirmations! thank you for sharing! :-)

Morning said...

love it.

Classic NYer said...

This is great advice and worth remembering. :-)

Harshad mehta said...

Very very energetic and inspiring words.

Ramesh Sood said...

You write so good.. but I would rate it among your best.. loved it..Tarang..

Tarang Sinha said...

I truly thank you all for such nice and encouraging comments:)

@ Rameshji: Thank you so much for such a nice comment! I'm glad you liked it:)

Laura Maria said...

So full of truth. I like how you put the prompt word in every verse. That second to last verse especially resonated with me. Great piece!

Sandra said...

positive attitude....very nice!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Laura: Thank you so much! I'm happy that you liked it:)

@ Sandra: Thank you!:)

© Westlander Poetry said...

wonderful rhythm infused with hope in this poem :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much!:)

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