My Translation

Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Move on!








Move on!

Opportunities are waiting for you.
So what, if this chance
Slipped from your hand
New horizons are standing
With open arms.


Move on!

Happiness is waiting for you
So what if grief
Knocked your heart
New joy is ready
To embrace you

Move on!

Amity is waiting for you
So what, if you
Couldn’t bond with someone
New camaraderie is
Extending hands for you

Move on!

Creativity is waiting for you
So what, if you
Lost your muse for once
New vision is
Taking shape for you.

Move on!

Life is waiting for you
So what if, darkness
Is suffused all over
New dawn is
About to rise very soon.


 Submitted to: Magpie Tales
                            Short Story Slam
                           Poetry Picnic 
                           One Single Impression

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25 comments:

  1. R. Burnett BakerAugust 31, 2011 at 1:14 AM

    Refreshing to read a positive, uplifting take on the photo!

    Rick

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  2. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryAugust 31, 2011 at 7:06 AM

    love the uplifting attitude.
    well done.

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  3. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryAugust 31, 2011 at 7:06 AM

    love the uplifting attitude.
    well done.

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  4. Jyoti MishraAugust 31, 2011 at 9:10 AM

    Move on is a magic word..
    u have depicted it beautifully

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  5. Tarang SinhaAugust 31, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    @ Rick & Morning: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)

    @ Jyoti: Yes it is. Thanks a lot:)

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  6. saurabh modiAugust 31, 2011 at 6:28 PM

    you know....the whole poem is amazing..
    but the ending takes away the cake.
    big time.big ,big time.!

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  7. LifeAugust 31, 2011 at 8:20 PM

    THIS IS FILLED WITH POSITIVENESS....:
    REALLY NICE

    FROM,
    LIFE
    MY ENTRY FOR THE SHORT STORY SLAM BOOK IS
    http://blindfold-princess.blogspot.com/2011/08/awaiting.html?spref=bl

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  8. Tarang SinhaAugust 31, 2011 at 10:04 PM

    @ Saurabh: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

    @ Life: Thank you!:)

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  9. AnonymousAugust 31, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    A wonderful poem, and I totally agree with the message!

    Here is my week 9 offering: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/

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  10. KaySeptember 1, 2011 at 12:32 AM

    Beautiful choice of words and wonderful perspective regarding the photo! Thank you :)

    http://kaysalady.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/at-half-past-four/

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  11. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 1, 2011 at 5:43 AM

    you have written it wholeheartedly,

    thanks for sharing.

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  12. Santosh KumarSeptember 1, 2011 at 9:11 AM

    Very inspiring! Keep it up. Move on..

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  13. hyperCRYPTICalSeptember 1, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    Lovely positive words.

    Anna :o]

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  14. Ann LeFloreSeptember 5, 2011 at 6:11 AM

    Such an love poem and the words are so positive and really inspire.

    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/05/the-milky-seas/

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  15. e.a.s. demersSeptember 13, 2011 at 10:13 AM

    such inspiring affirmations! thank you for sharing! :-)

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  16. MorningOctober 17, 2011 at 7:00 PM

    love it.

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  17. Classic NYerOctober 19, 2011 at 8:26 PM

    This is great advice and worth remembering. :-)

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  18. Harshad MehtaFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:18 PM

    Very very energetic and inspiring words.

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  19. Ramesh SoodFebruary 26, 2012 at 10:47 PM

    You write so good.. but I would rate it among your best.. loved it..Tarang..

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  20. Tarang SinhaFebruary 28, 2012 at 9:14 PM

    I truly thank you all for such nice and encouraging comments:)

    @ Rameshji: Thank you so much for such a nice comment! I'm glad you liked it:)

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  21. Laura MariaJune 17, 2012 at 6:54 PM

    So full of truth. I like how you put the prompt word in every verse. That second to last verse especially resonated with me. Great piece!

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  22. AnonymousJune 17, 2012 at 6:57 PM

    positive attitude....very nice!

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  23. Tarang SinhaJune 17, 2012 at 10:08 PM

    @ Laura: Thank you so much! I'm happy that you liked it:)

    @ Sandra: Thank you!:)

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  24. beeguilerJune 18, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    wonderful rhythm infused with hope in this poem :)

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  25. Tarang SinhaJune 18, 2012 at 11:57 AM

    Thank you so much!:)

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