Friday, February 24, 2012

Dream walks







                As Slumber kisses
    The goodnight, dream walks on the
               Path of subconscious




Dreams walk on the path
               Of wishes and desires
                   Destination calls





                 

 Haiku My Heart
Written for: The Haiku Challenge
Shared @ Poets United






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29 Comments:

Susie Clevenger said...

I love both of these...the second is my favorite...

janaki nagaraj said...

True...that dreams walk on the path of wishes.Nice.

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Susie: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you like it:)

@ Janaki: Thanks!:)

Chèvrefeuille said...

Love these haiku. Nice imagery.

Grace said...

Lovely haiku set ~

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

Wonderful haiku ~ very ethereal ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

priti.lisa said...

both are wonderful...the dusk and the dawn versions♥

Kim Mailhot said...

Hmmm, made me picture what "Dream" looks like as she walks...
Love that !
Happy Friday !

Arti Honrao said...

Sometimes, few words can say a lot :)

Nice!


GBU
Arti

Lea said...

Just love this pair of haiku... dreams walking on the path of subconscious... wow! Thank you Tarang!

becca givens said...

Nicely done ~~ thank you for sharing your perspective! I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

becca givens said...

Nicely penned --
I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

Fran aka Redondowriter said...

Ah dreams. Can you imagine a life without them?

Live2cherish said...

I wish the destination of my dreams is soon revealed :)

Lenora said...

as slumber kisses..the good night.. a wonderful soft movement..

The Solitary Writer said...

I love the 2 haiku's written by you :) :) The 2nd one is the best ;) Lovely.TC

tami said...

love the first haiku! wonderful imagery!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Oh dear!..Awesome lines...Dreams walk on the path of wishes and desires...Lovely line!

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Chèvrefeuille: Thank you:)
@ Grace: Thanks!:)
@ Carol: Thanks a lot! Namaste:)
@ Priti: Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Kim: Thanks! Have a nice day:)

@ Arti: Thanks! GBU:)

@ Lea: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

@ Becca: Thank you so much!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Fran: No! I can't:) Thanks!

@ Live2cherish: May your dreams reach a fruitful & blissful destination. Best wishes:)

@ Lenora: Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ The solitary writer: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)

@ Tami: Thank you!:)

@ Valli: Thank you so much!:)

Someone is Special said...

Tarang, I loved both the Haiku :-)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Someone is special: Thank you! Glad you liked it:)

Latha :-) said...

short lines but made great sense a lot! superb...

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Latha:)

turtlememoir said...

"Dreams walk on the path
Of wishes and desires"

and every now and then they go in a different direction

Tarang Sinha said...

Sometimes, not always:)
Thanks for your comment!

Ella said...

These are both so wonderful!
I love the second one best~
I love the idea of walking on this path :D

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