My Translation

Friday, February 24, 2012

Dream walks







                As Slumber kisses
    The goodnight, dream walks on the
               Path of subconscious




Dreams walk on the path
               Of wishes and desires
                   Destination calls





                 

 Haiku My Heart
Written for: The Haiku Challenge
Shared @ Poets United





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29 comments:

  1. Susie ClevengerFebruary 24, 2012 at 12:04 PM

    I love both of these...the second is my favorite...

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  2. JANUFebruary 24, 2012 at 12:12 PM

    True...that dreams walk on the path of wishes.Nice.

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  3. Tarang SinhaFebruary 24, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    @ Susie: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you like it:)

    @ Janaki: Thanks!:)

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 24, 2012 at 2:10 PM

    Love these haiku. Nice imagery.

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  5. GraceFebruary 24, 2012 at 6:31 PM

    Lovely haiku set ~

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  6. carol l mckennaFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:35 PM

    Wonderful haiku ~ very ethereal ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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  7. Priti LisaFebruary 24, 2012 at 9:55 PM

    both are wonderful...the dusk and the dawn versions♥

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  8. Kim MailhotFebruary 24, 2012 at 10:03 PM

    Hmmm, made me picture what "Dream" looks like as she walks...
    Love that !
    Happy Friday !

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  9. Arti HonraoFebruary 25, 2012 at 1:18 AM

    Sometimes, few words can say a lot :)

    Nice!


    GBU
    Arti

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  10. LeaFebruary 25, 2012 at 6:45 AM

    Just love this pair of haiku... dreams walking on the path of subconscious... wow! Thank you Tarang!

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  11. becca givensFebruary 25, 2012 at 7:20 AM

    Nicely done ~~ thank you for sharing your perspective! I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

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  12. becca givensFebruary 25, 2012 at 7:27 AM

    Nicely penned --
    I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

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  13. Fran aka RedondowriterFebruary 25, 2012 at 8:57 AM

    Ah dreams. Can you imagine a life without them?

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  14. Live2cherishFebruary 25, 2012 at 10:01 AM

    I wish the destination of my dreams is soon revealed :)

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  15. LenoraFebruary 25, 2012 at 10:47 AM

    as slumber kisses..the good night.. a wonderful soft movement..

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  16. The Solitary WriterFebruary 25, 2012 at 12:51 PM

    I love the 2 haiku's written by you :) :) The 2nd one is the best ;) Lovely.TC

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  17. tamiFebruary 25, 2012 at 8:00 PM

    love the first haiku! wonderful imagery!

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  18. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺February 25, 2012 at 9:13 PM

    Oh dear!..Awesome lines...Dreams walk on the path of wishes and desires...Lovely line!

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  19. Tarang SinhaFebruary 25, 2012 at 9:20 PM

    @ Chèvrefeuille: Thank you:)
    @ Grace: Thanks!:)
    @ Carol: Thanks a lot! Namaste:)
    @ Priti: Thanks!:)

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  20. Tarang SinhaFebruary 25, 2012 at 9:22 PM

    @ Kim: Thanks! Have a nice day:)

    @ Arti: Thanks! GBU:)

    @ Lea: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

    @ Becca: Thank you so much!:)

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  21. Tarang SinhaFebruary 25, 2012 at 9:30 PM

    @ Fran: No! I can't:) Thanks!

    @ Live2cherish: May your dreams reach a fruitful & blissful destination. Best wishes:)

    @ Lenora: Thank you!:)

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  22. Tarang SinhaFebruary 25, 2012 at 9:31 PM

    @ The solitary writer: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)

    @ Tami: Thank you!:)

    @ Valli: Thank you so much!:)

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  23. Someone is SpecialFebruary 26, 2012 at 1:21 AM

    Tarang, I loved both the Haiku :-)

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  24. Tarang SinhaFebruary 26, 2012 at 12:39 PM

    @ Someone is special: Thank you! Glad you liked it:)

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  25. Latha :-)February 28, 2012 at 10:57 AM

    short lines but made great sense a lot! superb...

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  26. Tarang SinhaFebruary 28, 2012 at 8:42 PM

    Thank you so much Latha:)

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  27. AnonymousMay 3, 2012 at 10:31 PM

    "Dreams walk on the path
    Of wishes and desires"

    and every now and then they go in a different direction

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  28. Tarang SinhaMay 3, 2012 at 10:38 PM

    Sometimes, not always:)
    Thanks for your comment!

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  29. EllaMay 4, 2012 at 1:38 AM

    These are both so wonderful!
    I love the second one best~
    I love the idea of walking on this path :D

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