Friday, September 28, 2012

Vanished in a blink






Image taken from Short Story Slam


Some dreams waltz in mind
Heart yearns to embrace them…tight
Vanished in a blink




21 comments:

  1. love the precise and quick way of your expression.

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  2. Dreams can be wonderful, but inevitably, impossible to hold on to. Nice, Tarang.

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  3. Like the "vanished in a blink" - so true, so true

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  4. Ah...this is so true. If only we could hold on to them!

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  5. "vanished in a blink" It is true of some dreams. I enjoyed you haiku today.

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  6. Very deep lines Tarang.. I love your Haikus a lot. You somehow seem to conjure magic everytime!

    BTW lovely pic, suits your lines very well :)

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  7. @ Green Speck: Yes, it is very sad but it happens...sometimes:)

    @ @ Taylor Boomer: You're right!:)

    @ Jingle: Thank you very much!:)

    @ PattiKen: Well said. Thank you!:)

    @ Kristjan Panneman: Thank you!:)

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  8. @ Judith: Glad you liked it. Thank you!:)

    @ Barbara: :) If only...:)

    @ Ellecee: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Monica Evans: Thank you!:)

    @ Me: Thank you so much Me! I'm so glad you like my haiku :)

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  9. Awesome expression...Lovely haiku!

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  10. some dreams waltz, some dreams plod, and some dreams stumble. All, I think, are worth pursuing.


    Wilderness Waltz

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  11. So true about dreams. The best one are gone, end you get sleepless trying to capture them again.

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  12. love the precise words.

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  13. Sweet haiku--both the literal bubble and the hanging on to children/childhood. Well done.

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  14. @ Valli: Thank you!:)

    @ MMT: You're right!:)

    @ Brudburg: :)

    @ Silverfox: Thanks!:)

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  15. @ Karin: Thank you very much!:)

    @ Nataeven: Thank you!:)

    @ Pure2core: Thank you so much!:)

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