Friday, August 2, 2013

Memories....






My first attempt at 55 Fiction! written for: Write Tribe



She took out the old album and settled herself on the rest chair, her husband used to sit on. She adjusted her specs to have a look at those smiling pictures, her only companion in utter loneliness, for the millionth time. She touched them tenderly. Memories wheeled once again. Tears strolled down her wrinkled cheek.



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25 Comments:

Kalpana Solsi said...

Your maiden F-55 is wonderful and the tender nostalgia is well brought out. Fell sad for the lady.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Kalpana!:)

themuseumpiece said...

A lifetime of memories compressed in 55 words. Nicely done :)

- Vaisakh

Suzy said...

Oh so sweet and tender. Very nicely done.

Kathy said...

Oh, I love this. So many times I have found myself in the same exact position. This really touched me deeply in my soul. Beautiful!!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Vaisakh!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks Suzy!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Awww...I'm glad you liked this. Thank you so much Kathy! Best wishes!:)

Jyoti Mishra said...

feeling nostalgic :)
photographs have a way of pulling you back to those lovely times.

Tarang Sinha said...

:)

Me said...

Pure sweet Love that wins the passage of time and stays strong.. Well put Tarang!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Me!:)

Reshma said...

Beautifully worded Tarang, her loneliness and attempts to revisit her past have been brought out effectively in so few words...

Bhavya said...

My heart goes out to the lady :(

Tarang Sinha said...

Glad you liked it. Thank you Reshma!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

:(...
Thanks!

Satya said...

Pain and longing depicted beautifully within teh constraints of words... Nice!

Richa Singh said...

they have a way no? The memories, they almost walk through one's heart..

Richa

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks Satya!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

True!:)

shellymona said...

Memories....our best companion... never leave us alone......
loved your post...

Tarang Sinha said...

True! Thank you Shellymona!:)

vishalbheeroo said...

Hi Tarang, beautifully etched 55-er with love and feeling:)

vishal bheeroo said...

Hi Tarang, beautifully etched 55-er with love and feeling:)

Vishal
(www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Vishal!:)

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