Thursday, May 10, 2012

Raindrops




Tears, blinding the eyes
Shedding like raindrops, express
Emotional outbreak

Scorched earth soaks in the
Refreshing raindrops and basks
In joy and relief!


Written for: Tackle It Tuesday
          Poetry Jam







Share/Bookmark

11 Comments:

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Nicely done Tarang. I love the way you have used the prompt.
Thank you for being part of "Tackle It Tuesday".

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)

Mary Mansfield said...

Brief but powerful! At least blindness caused by tears can be wiped away :) Thanks for playing along with us at Poetry Jam!

janaki nagaraj said...

Visiting you after some time...refreshing.

Me said...

Beautiful lines:)

Neha said...

Beautiful words Tarang :)

Helen said...

Lovely, lovely haiku.

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Mary: Yes, you're right! I'm glad you liked this. Thank you very much!:)

@ Janaki: :) Thank you!:)

@ Me: Thank you!:)

@ Neha: Thanks a lot!:)

@ Helen: Thank you so much!:)

Jinksy said...

Tears and raindrops are brothers under the skin! :)

Sreeja said...

beautiful and refreshing...

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Jinsky: :)

@ Sreeja: Thank you!:)

Post a Comment

 
;