Thursday, May 10, 2012

Raindrops

© Written by Tarang Sinha




Tears, blinding the eyes
Shedding like raindrops, express
Emotional outbreak

Scorched earth soaks in the
Refreshing raindrops and basks
In joy and relief!


Written for: Tackle It Tuesday
          Poetry Jam






11 comments:

  1. Nicely done Tarang. I love the way you have used the prompt.
    Thank you for being part of "Tackle It Tuesday".

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  2. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)

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  3. Brief but powerful! At least blindness caused by tears can be wiped away :) Thanks for playing along with us at Poetry Jam!

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  4. Visiting you after some time...refreshing.

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  5. @ Mary: Yes, you're right! I'm glad you liked this. Thank you very much!:)

    @ Janaki: :) Thank you!:)

    @ Me: Thank you!:)

    @ Neha: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Helen: Thank you so much!:)

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  6. Tears and raindrops are brothers under the skin! :)

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  7. @ Jinsky: :)

    @ Sreeja: Thank you!:)

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